| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:37 PDT
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OMG KEEEEP GOING. AND WHAT WILL LILIANA DO THE POOR SOUL I FEEL BAD FOR HER. Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:31 PDT
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Oh goodness, I'm so happy that Sesshoumaru and Kagura are together in this fic. I've read quite a few good fanfictions where Sesshoumaru and Rin's relationship ruined it for me, so I'm really glad that you chose Kagura *does a little gleeful dance*. Excellent chapter, you kept the suspense while slipping some answers... not enough to make the reader feel overwhelmed, but enough to keep us hooked, the answers dangling and deliciously tantalizing. Also, you have managed to keep a list of OCs, but unlike other fics, the reader is intrigued rather than annoyed. Wonderful character development, the dynamics, the rules, and the intricacies of the family/pack. I am anxiously looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome[Not logged in] On: October 27, 2007 10:50 PDT
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Well YAY to another chapter!! And damn Sesshomaru whooped Inu's ass. hmm.. this story is one of my favorites yet i don t know how but there seems to be something missing. Well good chapter. And HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!![too]
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I knew Sessh was going to be pissed, But I was still sorry to see Yash get his butt kicked. He's a real jerk.....but a likeable one. And, honestly, considering what Sesshoumaru COULD have done to him, Inuyasha got off pretty easy, LOL. I look forward to reading the next one.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Going i love this story = ) Please udate soon
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 00:03 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 06:01 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is just getting better by the word!!!! you gotta be quick!! im dieing here!!
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Reviewed By: future author On: October 21, 2007 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter as always. I'm glad that you were able to update. I enjoyed reading this chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next and to find out about the object that Inu asked about and what I assume is the same object kag asked about. Again, great chapter. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Thanx for updating1! It's sooooo awesome!!! Great story! don't forget to update more!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 05:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I hope to read more soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo, update! I love em, hehe. Love how Inu and Sess were described as 'old Gloomies one and two', lol, that was cute. Wonder if they find any humor in it tho. :D Also love the addition of a few more OCs, as well as the intro to Miroku and Sango: that was good as well. Getting interesting too with the book Kags was snoopin into. Cant wait to see what else goes on, but update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 23:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice chapter update... kagome seems to be doing her own investigating... and meeting more of inuyasha's family... what will happen now... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 21:41 PDT
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Hmm.. always the nosey one Kagome. I'm so happy you updated!! I liked the new chap. Gave some more information to whats to come in the future. Also I saw a couple of errors here and there throughout the story. Do you have a BETA? If not maybe you should get one. Their awesome. lol =D
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Reviewed By: The_ Mad_ Hatter_36 On: October 19, 2007 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More? This is great! Where'd you get the idea for using Nightwalkers? They sound familiar. I can't wait for you to write more. I'm hooked, vertually addicted to the story already. I can see great things happening in the plot. I'm just waiting to see what happens. Love the lemons and the fruit punch mix. But I'm getting thristy again. The_Mad_Hatter_36
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