| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: snowfire2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 02:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have a great story going here. i love it! it keeps me on edge and its different than the rest of those other fanfics. there's so many stories that are repetitive and your story is like a breath of fresh air. Keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 00:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh this stories going so well! i love the character and plot development and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: ro0tin4Kagome [not loffed in] On: October 02, 2007 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh! I need another chapter. Im thristy for it ...lol sorrry I tried, but I just had too. SO far the story is crazy. And I was beginning to wonder if Inuyasha did something else to her? Darn person now you gots me wondering! lol Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [Notloggedin] On: October 02, 2007 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry Im not logged in to lazy! Bull that was your first lemon?!!! you did an incredible job! And so far the storyline seems interesting! Im gonna keep reading!Great job!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun, dun... DUN! And the plot thickens, lol. Now what is Miroku and Sango up to? Cant be good I suspect. Or maybe just a misunderstanding of sorts? Heh, should be interesting to find out. And cant wait till Sess joins the party, they'll be scrappin his ass off the ceiling when he finds out about his brother. Is gettin very good here. Until next time... update when ya can! :0
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Reviewed By: magical obi On: October 02, 2007 12:16 PDT
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Miroku and Sango have arrived Yes!! Now I don't know who to root for. And I really do not like this Liliana girl, it may seem a bit mean but I hope she becomes a casualty of war.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 12:12 PDT
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OMFG what does that mean??? This story is getting so good, you're such an awesome writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... there must be a reason why inuyasha is addicted to kagome... everything is still mysterious... hopefully in the next chapter you can shed some light... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 09:13 PDT
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...have I ever told you, I love you? (rotflmao loved the update!)
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 02, 2007 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. This chapter was great. I wanted the chapter to go on and hated to see the it end. Thanks for writing a great story. I will be watching for updates.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 05:25 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG Miroku and Sango are in it now!!!! OMFG i need to know more!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont be long!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 04:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It's so ironic that kagome thinks she looks sick when the rest of the world thinks that she's gotten prettier. And it's also amazing how SHALLOW guys can be. She wasn't interesting to them at all before her dealings with Inuyasha enhanced her looks. Now, all of the sudden, she's getting asked out on dates by guys who normally wouldn't give her a second glance. How UNflattering....and typical. I do wonder what Miroku and Sango's roles are in this story. It will be interesting to find out. Good story.
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Title: l love it!!
Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 10:20 PDT
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This is quickly becoming one of my favorites!! I absolutely can't get enough of it! BRAVO!
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, from a one-shot to a full fiction. It's great! I am looking forward to another chapter. Chanda
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. I'm liking the interactions you have going on, as well as your OCs, most excellent. Now what will Sess do when he finds out. Not think he'll be a happy camper, lol. Till next time, update when ya can! ;)
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