| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 17:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good writing, sorry I'm not to good with comment but I do read your stories when you post them and I Love them. I think Inuyasha has more them a addiction to Kagome and he dosen't want to admid it, Kagome having the same feelings and a afraid to admid it too. I think their is something going on with Lillana and Narek and she is afraid to say something about it think she get into troble because if I remember right he wants Lillana to join him right.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 19:01 PST
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YESYES UH...idk YES Iloved it!!! haha. No for real this chapter just made me really happy,not ina sadistic way. I just was having a crappy day from work and an update was very needed. =D ANd yes I think I might know who was with Richard. But update when you can. Heyy maybe you will have good timing again.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 15, 2007 06:07 PST
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Ok I like this chapter, especially the kag/inu stuff towards the end. I'm really looking forward to how they are gonna interact in any of the future chapters. Anyway I think u have created a pretty interesting bad guy and now that he has this past you'll even have people who sympathize for him. Still I'm not sure I really like the idea of him being stronger than Inu, I mean Inu was born a nightwalker and he's a lot older than Narek. But I also never agree with stories that have Sess being way stronger than Inu either, the only time Sess ever truly beat Inu in the series was when Inu went full demon and could not think. And the time Sess put his hand through Inu's chest he said that if he continued to attack Inu would kill him so he left. *shrug* oh well. Update soon ok I'm dieing for more Kag/Inu action!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Good update!! I swear this story is awesome, and I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter. Loved the moment between InuYasha and Kagome. Narek is such a tortured soul. I pity him and hate him all at once lol Great characters and awesome plot and twists. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 15:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thanks for the update!! The chapter was interesting. I dont think the chapter was as dark as you thought it would be, but I understand the warning none the less. Narek, is very angry inside. Too bad they dont have nightwalker therapy. Lol....what I really liked about this chapter is that there was more Inu/Kags interaction. There is a lot to learn of the nightwalkers and their background, but it is also nice to have more dialog where our two favorite characters become closer. Its fun watching thier relationship blossom. Thanks for the update again, and take care!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 09:25 PST
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yay, you've updated! Awesome chapter. so now we know who the heck is Narek. I love the scene between Inu and Kags, so sweet and cute!!! ^^ Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: bk On: November 14, 2007 05:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story but I am a little confused. What exactly is a natural born nightwalker. I understand the ones created from humans. Anyway thanks for another great chapter and I will be watching for future updates.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 04:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Narek's history is tragic.....but that doesn't excuse what he's doing. I do wonder what the attraction to Kagome is, though, for Narek. Is it just because he knows Inuyasha wants her? Speaking of Inuyasha, I was glad to see a little progress made between him and Kagome. And I was especailly glad when Kagome stood up for herself at the end. Inuyasha will walk all over her if she doesn't stop him. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 04:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least kagome knows a bit more now... on who made who... but things are still confusing and complicated... seems that they're after kagome now... but kinda neat that inuyasha & kagome kissed... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 03:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U r the best writer i have ever read from I love you and please keep going
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 02:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never knew about the Armenia's (actually though.... is that a spelling error...lol) and found out a lot... I love the idea that Nightwalkers are really tight nit Families. And that Claire (me... lol) was changed by InuYasha, it has really proven that their relationship is a close one.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 22:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that must have been hard on Narek T-T hmmmm every1 wants Kagome in their hands! and OMG Inuyasha kissed Kagome... *squeals* he acts so high and mighty... and Lilliana i keep thinking like her and Narek are tiwns lol but i got a feeling that i want Sango to catch Kagome through the day... P.S. i jumped when i saw you have updated :P
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Reviewed By: Present to myself ^_^ On: November 13, 2007 19:09 PST
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I just like to say that I really enjoy Rukiya's character and the way you have developed her. I also appreciate how you put a lot of descriptions in your stories. It's good when the reader can picture what the author is trying to describe. I have also notest that you like to put in the theme, do not be fooled by appearances or actions but not just this story but in Bad Influences also. (Yoko) Ooo and one last thing, I don't usually do this but I think it would go well with your story. Um for the next lemon can I recommend that they be standing up in someway, I think it would go with the type of story this is and character you are portraying in it. Now if I'm and wrong then plz tell me. And you don't have to take the recommendation I well not be afendit. Have a great day
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 13:25 PST
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What has changed about Kagome? Her friends keep talking about how she has changed. While i was reading you story I kept thinking about Inuyasha with Kagome and the song "Music of the Night" by Andrew Lloyd Webber, kept running through my head. I just thought it fit so perfectly. I really am enjoying you story so far but i think you would benefit from a beat reader. It becomes difficult to read at times thats all.
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