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| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: May 11, 2008 11:20 PDT
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OOOOOH!!! I know what Fenrir is!! Not in your story, but just a Fenrir in general...this story was the first thing I thought of because I recognized the name... "The Fenrir is a ravonous wolf that is the offspring of the Norse God Loki. Fenrir is bound with an invisable chain, but is destined to break free at the end of the world, swallowing the Sun and biting the Moon. He then joins Loki on the battlefield where he kills the God Odin and is then killed himself. " I was so exited.... T_T
| Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: April 30, 2008 14:38 PDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! HOW CAN YOU END IT THERE!?!?!?! Ok I'm calm now. Well that was certainly a surprise. Narek has the blood stone… and what's with Inuyasha being able to go so long without Kagome's blood. I wonder who the real king is supposed to be. I don't know why but I get the feeling that it's going to be Kagome… even though she's not a nightwalker. Then again I could be COMPLETELY wrong. I cannot wait until the next update. Kanna
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 01:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is doing fine... who is that man in the photo that they seem to recognize... what's up with inuyasha & kagome... they can't seem to get any closer because they are always so far apart... and the bad guys seem to have the upper hand... what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: megumi192 On: April 27, 2008 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, just when the trail grows cold. My only question is are you going to use another stone like the jewel of 4 souls that can help Inuyasha's family out. Also when is Kagome going to admit she loves him and he going to admit he loves her? great job can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Quimera-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 15:23 PDT
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Miss Ji-an, I so much apreciate the dedication on this latest chapter my dear. I just expressed to you my most sincere feelings about this story (yes, because this is no longer a fanfiction, it has evolved into a story of your own). This latest chapter really showed the awfull waiting that our ladies have been submited too for 3 months. So frustrating...poor Kagome. She still didn't figure her feelings for Inuyasha. But i still wonder why inuyasha's body was still hot. Was it because he bited Kagome earlier or... something else? Hm...love a little surprise effect xD And yay! Finnally the stone happeared! I hope that now Kagome and Inuyasha can stay together a little longer. I so want their relationship to grow :3 And i really want to know wich Lilliana's memories have been erased, and the importance that they have...and who is the boy? OMG so many questions xDDD Well, update soon my dear! Love to receive e-mails notifying this fanfic :D they make my day.
| Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 13:00 PDT
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omg...on Narek's ring?!?! how're they gonna get it now?!?!? (=.=) anyways, yet another great chapter. update soon! Kimiko =D
| Reviewed By: fudge On: April 27, 2008 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kag's feelings are starting to show more and more, though i'm still waiting for some fluff haha. I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 11:38 PDT
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oooh the suspense. I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Great chapter. Nice twist with the bloodstone. I hope they can find more good guys! I can't wait to read more!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 04:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
before Narek?? what the hell are you on about?? anyways 3 months... i cant believe Inuyasha was still kicking lol im happy Inuyasha is back ^^ and i was sooo happy when you updated ^^
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 03:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god!!!!!! 3 whole months.... I would like a battle or some thing to brighten up my life... (3 months with only two people who can really understand you... start to go nuts) no wonder the bad guy has it... who was the night king before Narek??????
| Reviewed By: BEST REVIEW EVER! On: April 18, 2008 12:10 PDT
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I have just finished reading your story "Nightwalker" and...i am so addicted, like inuyasha xD The way that the characters evolved till this last chapter, was alarming. They all grew so much in 20 chapters, and i adore the way that they feel so at ease on Kagome's presence.A complete family.Your own characters are adorable, so easy to accept and to imagine...all of them. Love Rukiya and Claire! Their personalities are the most captivating, and i just adore every line they say xD Claire is so good hearted, everything she says is just to laugh out loud xDDDD Hm...as much i would love to say that i like Lilliana i have to say that i can´t stand her bad mood. LOL im sorry, it must be because my name is also Liliana and i so dont have that grumpy attitude. I do understand that her time during the war, when she was human, gave her the worst impression of the world and thats why she is like this. But on this last chapters, thank God, she was getting so much nicer, specially towards Kagome! That made me very happy :3 The romance of Inuyasha and Kagome is so tense...ahhhh, love hard romances ^___^ they're the most satisfying ones. I know, and agree, that you dont like love at first sight, because thats too easy on fanfics! But let me tell you a thing: a little more romance on their thinking and on their lines, besides the intense lemon parts, would suit them alot better now. Yes, they are having a hard time accepting this "instictive" relationship, but i still dont understand why hasn't kagome, an ultra thinking brain that she is xD, thing about..."am i getting in love with him?". I wont even say, that Inuyasha could thing that because.....he couldnt xD LOOOL Just couldnt, poor thing. But im expecting a lot of love in the next chapters! A little lemon with them again would be nice, in the future eheh xD, but im talking about realization on both parts, and a lot of protection coming from inuyasha...i just love when he protects her from danger ^o^ Daam.....what a long review .___. Just wanted to add that i like very much your way of writting. Its very detailed, specially on the lemon parts wich, i may say, are very very well writen. I read that you said that you still didnt like the way that they sounded, and i think that part of it, is that the action is sometimes a little confusing xD On some parts i dont even know if kagome is turned towards inuyasha, the pose that they are presented and location that they are on. The description of the bg during the action, and how it affects the characters is many times a very important point on this scnenes. Besides that, nothing very relevant...love the way you used Hotel California on the lovingly chapter that Inu danced with kags ^___^ and, that you could sometimes help a little bit more on the way that they are dressed xD sometimes i have a hard time trying to figure out their clothing xp Hmmm....let's see, talked about the characters, romance, way of writting... Yup, I think i didnt forget anything ^_____^ And with this i say goodbye, and wish soon lots of other chapters :D Hope that my review isnt too long and annoying ;3 Best wishes (Keep up the great work! ;D) A new addicted follower Quimera-chan***
| Reviewed By: bellabelieves On: April 13, 2008 22:07 PDT
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Your story is of a very creative sort; I enjoy it immensely. It reminds me of a series of novels written by Stephanie Meyer, the first called Eclipse. Maybe you based your story off it? They are remarkably similar much to my pleasure. If not I'd recommend you read them, it is fascinating the resemblance your stories share. Once again, I really enjoy reading your piece.
| Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 15:50 PDT
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EEK! ...wanted to read how Inu bited her. xD aww well, awesome chapter. cant wait to read more!!! Kimiko =D
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