| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 21:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. It was action-packed, to say the least. And you did a good job with those battle scenes; not everyone can. Kagome is not nearly as weak as Inuyasha thinks she is; she kicked some butt here. But she also STILL doesn't get it. Inuyasha DIES without her, period. And, she STILL doesn't seem to understand how dangerous the nightwalker world can be. Hopefully, she'll have a better idea after this chapter. I just hope that they can find enough anti-venom to save everyone. Thanks for working so hard on this chapter; it was really good work. Now, go pass out, lol. You deserve it!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: January 12, 2008 19:21 PST
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yay great chapter! Kagome's a bit of an idiot, but she's never really had a whole lot of common sense >< lol btw - MY favorite character or yours is.......Claire She's the best hehe Wonderful job on the chappie! Kudos to you! -- Ookami Hime Suriya
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 17:47 PST
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This is turning out great! Wonder when Inuyasha will have to feed again? Anyway, please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 17:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of action here... seems that sesshoumaru's group were able to get out... and seems that there will be some additions to their group too... like sango & miroku... and when they all meet up seems that kagome will be in trouble... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: nightwalker
Reviewed By: Nobody speacial On: January 10, 2008 13:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER ... but I can't wait for Kagome ot get turned into a nightwalker...not now....but soon... i also agree with Deja can she have a tail and ears like Inuyasha and make her look breathtaking.....PLEASE UPTADE SOOON !!!!!!!!!
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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: Homebody54 On: January 08, 2008 17:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so glad Kagome followed Lilliana cause now she can show what she's made of and.....AND THAT SHE IS NOT A WEAK HUMAN!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 08:29 PST
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damn, kags shouldnt be following Lilliana. This is gonna definitely create more trouble for Inu and Lilliana. Well, great chap, cant wait for the next one!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 06:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. No fluff....but your plot progressed really well. I can't wait to see what happens next. Narek, Fenrir, and the others are diabolical......and we haven't even met their boss yet! Naraku, or whoever it is, must really be something awful if his underlings are this bad. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 01:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.i love the cliffhanger... its all like "the buildings going to explode... there is not enough time leave me here"..... as you probably know I vote for Claire as my favorite origianl character
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 01:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Disclaimer: Nope, don't own Inuyasha. He belongs to the brilliant Romiko Takahashi alone. Bit Rukiya, Bill, Lilliana, Natalia, Albier, Fenrir, Christiano and Narek are mine! ESPECIALLY NAREK!" (Chaos, chapter 13) do you declare that you do not own me? (Claire?) lol.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 01:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was only joking about hate Claire! now back to reading the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:52 PST
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Hi there! My favorite nightwlaker in Inuyasha of corse but I like Claire, Because she is carefree spirt and I love her Music. If I was one of the characters Claire and I would get along very good almost like sisters, throught if I remember right she became a nightwalker very young like a teenager so she look young ,but she 40's or 50's years old am I right, if so then she 10 or 20 years older then me maybe that why i like her charater. Great story you are doing a very good job keep it up until next time.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... the actions starting... hope everyone gets out alive... how will kagome help... does she hold any secret powers or something... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 19:53 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ofc its Narek ^^ hes even my fav nightwalker :P besides Sesshy :P and Lilliana aswell ^^ and good chapter ^^ you had me on the edge at the end!!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 18:54 PST
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oooooh drama oh and is your favorite character....Narek by any chance?
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