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Reviewed By: future author On: September 20, 2007 11:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always. I wonder what the rest of the truth is. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 07:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome's not happy about her situation... hope inuyasha & kagome will get along... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 04:02 PDT
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Good chapter. I am really enjoying the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome, and I definitely look forward to finding out more about their situation. Obviously, there's more to this than Kagome's been told, and I can't wait to find out what that is.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo i LOVE it!!!! im sooo drawn into this story! your such a great author!!! you must type more!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: September 18, 2007 21:26 PDT
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I know I wanted him to bite her again. ^.^ Anyway it was a marvelous job and I enjoyed the longer chapter. So what happens now? He's bitten her twice now...what will the punishment be? Will they just have to be together so that he can feed off her now? Not that that would be a bad thing for the sake of the story and for their developing relationship. Honestly I understand that these Nightwalkers are different from vampires...kinda like Carpathians right? They thrive at night and feed off of people but don't kill and they aren't evil but they do have an animalistic quality/side to them. If you like that kind of guy you described in the beginning of this chapter I highly recommend that you read Christine Feehan's Carpathian series...My fav is Dark Guardian. ^.^
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Title: common day vouyer
Reviewed By: Maeve Kelly On: September 18, 2007 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not everyday I get to read some good ol' smut. It's even better when it the reading populace says to make it into a story. And I love the fact that Kagome is not a classical beauty. I was hooked with the first chapter- the one shot, and as I've read, am anticipating more. My only critic, watch for little spelling mistakes and continuity of your sentence structure. BUT - your story is a mastery in the works. Another shiny star I've added to my fav's list. So I'm off to read your other work. It's the joy of finding new authors (to me) to read, because I love to see a author's development in writing style and you paint a pretty picture with your words. :) Ja ne! Maeve
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: ca_ca_00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 06:25 PDT
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Aha! More obstacles in their path! Bravo - this has become just that much more intriguing... not to mention, you've sawn seeds for a nice twist sometime other with the little 'if only you were dying', 'bite her heart' and 'make her one of us' lines... I'm hooked, Mam'selle. Chain me to the wall, because I'm hogtied and whining for more! :p
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 02:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... wonder what inuyasha will do now... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 00:53 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is addicted to Kagome's blood.... while im addicted to this story!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really do get better and better with each chapter. You really have me excited for the next installment. Wont Sess be pissed...lol?? Thank you so much for updating, and take care!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 19:15 PDT
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ohmygosh PLEASE update soon! i cant wait for the next chapter. man, this story is so addicting!!! >.< Kagome looking plain with a cute button nose is alright with me. in the actual series, Kagome doesnt exactly LOOK that good in reality, so I kinda agree with you. please update soon!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 19:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I LOVE Inuyasha in this story; he is SO sexy! And I also like the different spin you're putting on Kagome. It makes the fact that someone as gorgeous and powerful as Inuyasha is falling for someone so....ordinary even more profound. And I can't wait to see how you explain this "addiction" Inuyasha has to her. He said something about "100% blood compatibility", so I got that much. But I wonder what else it means....I definitely look forward to finding out. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 16, 2007 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It seems despite the fact she tried to stay away it's inevitible. I wonder what happens when someone breaks the rule and bites twice. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until the next update, good luck!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yesh! Love updates, specially when they're this good! And I know what ya mean bout Kagome being a raving beauty... I like her like that too, but also like when she more plain. A good combo of both, and I think you have her pretty good here. But I love the premise of your story as well. I'm not all into the whole vampire spiel much either, so this is very refreshing. So if you couldn't tell, I'm enjoying your story very much, So till next time... update when ya can! ;)
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