| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ash. On: September 04, 2007 16:04 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story you should add some more chapters
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: September 04, 2007 15:03 PDT
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Yowza!! I have no complaints about your citrus.In fact I want more!! Sooo is another chapter going to go up? Please.
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Reviewed By: MOORRRREEE!!! On: September 04, 2007 10:15 PDT
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THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE IN MIND FOR A STORY LINE!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 23:21 PDT
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I agree with everyone else. You did exceptionally well for your first lemon, and I too wouldn't mind seeing this continued into a full story. Though as a one-shot, it does stand alone beautifully.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: September 02, 2007 19:54 PDT
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Aww man why did this have to be a one-shot? It was so good. Perhaps a sequel or another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 10:16 PDT
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Okay so I know its suppose to be a oneshot, but c'mon! You know you want him to come back for moreeee.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 08:54 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Awesome fic!! plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should continue and make a sequal i want to know what happens if he comes back. It was really good so far.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 19:36 PDT
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That was very fancy write very good job for you first time in lemon I'm inpress you got my blood boiling, keep up at the good work . I readed your other work you a very good writer.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 21:47 PDT
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good job. very descriptive. =)
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Reviewed By: Amazona dos Elementos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 20:12 PDT
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planning to continue? Becouse I think you MUST do it!!!!
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Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 13:34 PDT
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Nice PWP. Sweet of him to limit his drinking, but I guess he won't go back for more now that she's lost that virgin taste? It might make for a nice sequel, though. I donate regularly and if he's coming back for more, he might want to wait a couple of months.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 11:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... really liked it... any chance for a one shot sequel... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 10:45 PDT
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OMG! For a lemon virgin, that was awesome (LOL). Are u planning to continue? Please do that was very very nice!
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Reviewed By: Shadesof Night114 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 09:24 PDT
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me like lots!! whens round two??
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