| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 04:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha Inuyasha is going to have fun taking Kagome with him... well more like telling her... thats going to be funny lol anyways ill beat Claire's and Bill's mum and dad -___- and i hope you do GREAT in ya finals! unlike me, i know i failed mine lol anyways merry xmas!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 01:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm sorry, too, that I didn't really comment on the Armenian genocide last chapter. Honestly, that was the first time I'd heard of it, I'm ashamed to say. It was AWFUL.....ALL genocide is awful. No group should ever be targeted and hunted just for being different from someone else. But, unfortunately, it STILL happens (Rwanda, Darfur, Bosnia....the list goes on.) As for this chapter, it was cute. Family is family, powerful nightwalkers or not, lol. Claire's (and Bill's) origin was interesting, as all of their back story's have been. But....Inuyasha has his work cut out for him next time. I can't wait too see Kagome's reaction when he tells her that she has to essentially give up her own life to go with him. It's going to be intense....but probably a bit funny too. As powerful as Inuyasha is, there is still a part of him that is actually afraid.....of little bitty Kagome, lol. Of course, little bitty Kagome has a heck of a temper, too, so maybe we should cut him some slack, lol. I look forward to reading the next one!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 00:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on the award!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 00:05 PST
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@ unistar. If the even tell her the plan... perhaps she overhears someone talking...(very unlikely as they are nightwalkers)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 00:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"What brain?" Kagome chuckled. Claire bit her tongue. "Good one. Don't let him hear that." Great line! Thanks *Blush*! Your stories an mutilayered and they have such great detail placed in them. Having a author with a brain and being original and actualy knowing stuff, really makes a story great! I think the American history fits in well as it show that they are connected to the past and they have a history themselves. I hope Kagome makes a fuss, I hope she get to travel with them... (and if she did become a drone what would happen to the story line? (because I don't think that zombie Kagome would be very interesting...)(wonders if she can even become one...)Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... wonder what kagome's reaction will be once they tell her about their plan... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 19:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't respond to your message about the Armenian Genocide, I've been so busy with school I haven't had a chance to review. I know all about the Armenian Genocide, the first Genocide of the Twentieth Century. Hitler once said, "Who remembers the Armenians?" And I say that I remember and all the good people in the world remember the Armenians and all victims of genocide and we will do everything in our power to not let it happen again.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 15:03 PST
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Please hurry with the next chapter im so excited to know more
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 11:36 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: November 30, 2007 09:50 PST
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Loved the chapter. I like that you have some more meat to this story than just bite bite bite. The back story on Narek was interesting. I would love to hear his side of the story, but it also seems like his brood sister is hiding something. I also like Inu's inability to control himself when he is around Kagome. It brings a lot of the manga relationship into play. Things I hope to see soon include: More interaction between Inu and Kags. Even though you have told us about the 'venom' I would love to see the side effects of it on Kagome. The hentai in me would love to read the confrontation (or even the lack of one talked about) between the two when she is having her bleeding cycle and the scent of her blood is in the air. I would like for you to do another chapter focusing on Sesshoumaru and why he brought his child into the family. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 14:11 PST
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Read the first chapter and it was great. Now I'm hooked :) Awesome. A new favorite author to my list :D
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 22:09 PST
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Poor Narek, he really does have a bad past. Although that doesn't really give him the right to treat people and Nightwalkers that way. I'm still a little confused by the part Lilliana still has to play with him, and their connection. I love that Inu/Kag interaction. I'm happy that Kagome was standing up for herself and a little shocked that she was saying all that to InuYasha. But I think its great that they are getting closer. Poor Inu not knowing what he feels. I am wondering more about the 100% blood compatible thing that was mentioned in earlier chapters. What does that really mean? Are Inu and Kag meant to be together? Will Kagome become something she isn't or does she have some secret past involving her blood we don't know about yet? Is she to be a Miko in this story, will that come into play? I'm dieing to find out more.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 04:01 PST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-AUAR-Fiction-3r d.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 10:14 PST
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I am truly enjoying this fic. It's really original, I don't think I've read anything like it. All the secrets and mistery plots really leave me wanting just one more chapter. I'm glad you veered off the regular cliche of vampirism, and made something totally your own. I think it makes the story that much more intriguing. Makes want to figure out who they really are, and what their enemies are like. :D
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Title: awesome story!
Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 18:45 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo :O who's in richard's office?! the suspense is killing me! >_< is it narek? is it the nightwalker king? =o i have got to say that your story is very amusing and interesting, i'm quite addicted to it..very much so like inuyasha to kagome's blood :] lol will inu+sesshy's background info be revealed soon? i sure hope so! ^-^ Can't wait until your next update!
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