| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Good update, and good luck with the test!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: October 30, 2007 17:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so I'm very grateful for the quick updates. Anyway could we get some more either lemony or limey moments between kag and inu. Or maybe just some fluff would be good. By the way I love this story and Kagura and Sess do sort of end up having a semi relationship and I like Rukiya she reminds me of Yuroishi from bleach. We'll update some time soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune (im not loged in) On: October 30, 2007 16:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVES IT!! cant wait for the next chappy! Inu and kags do end up likeing eachother right? not that this current situation isnt amusing to say the least. lol. I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to seeing more in the future. -Dessy-chan
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 13:09 PDT
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phew, that was a close shave! A very appropriate Halloween post, with shivers included in the package. Thanks for that; I'm also a little bit curious to see what's going on with this supposed poison... you add more goodies with every chapter, and to think it started off as a one-shot!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 09:16 PDT
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wow, this is getting more and more intense. thx for the early update though! greatly appreciated! good luck on ur test!!! and please update soon!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 30, 2007 07:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter. I can't believe she got captured by Narek so easily. Now that she is back I don't think he will let her out of his site anymore. And, what effects will the anti-venom have on her or the nightwalker if she is bitten again? So many questions, can't wait for your next update. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!! (All Giddy) (bounce, bounce, bounce) More InuYasha Time please!!!! he barely gets and "screen time." (finds the InuYasha scenes great!!!) Astronomy... weird... (I like Astronomy though, just think that is a weird school subject.) Have a Happy Halloween!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 01:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm just glad that they were able to get to Kagome in time. Kagome is more into Inuyasha than she is willing to admit, even to herself. And the same is true vice versa. I'm really enjoying how you're taking the time to SLOWLY get them together, rather than having them fall completely too quickly. This is much better.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun, dun, duuun... hes back! And with a vengeance it would seem. Damn, Yash'll be feelin that in the morning, lol. Great chap BTW. Love the complexities of the different OCs, as well as you're being able to keep em all straight, lol. And I almost missed this chap too, damned full email. Anyways, wonder what will Sess do/say first time he lays eyes on Kags. Oh that should be interesting and fun! Lol. Awesome, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: future author On: October 29, 2007 15:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always. I wonder what will happen next. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 14:17 PDT
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omg, please continue this story! i've been checking this every single day and i get so agitated when it's not updated...please update soon!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 19:12 PDT
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i really like your story =) only thing i'd say is to watch ur tenses (i screw them up all the time lol) and spelling. thanks for posting this!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter! The depth of Sesshamoru's character that was shown in this chapter was excellent. Even though you said that the characters may not be exactly like the Manga/TV Show ones, they come extremely close! The original characters are very well done too. I feel like I can really relate to Rukiya. And your take on Kagome being an average, albeit not ugly girl is refreshing. I am excited to meet the villain of the tale. The plot thickens! Kudos & Hugs!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you should warn people about drinking and reading your fanfiction, I almost laughed out loud at "Oh poo! And one of these day's I'm going to pull your ears so hard they're going to as long as a rabbits." I also find it creepy that you have Claire, my own name, as a character. I agree with her music choice (My dad listens to that stuff so I know the song. I love the oldies as well). More InuYasha scenes would be cool!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!! haven't even read the last chapter yet but i will still vote 10's for it... I know it will be good.
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