| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: September 12, 2007 08:39 PDT
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I love it! I love it! I love it! And how great is it that Kagome is not some defenseless twit. I would love to see her beat up Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 00:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob* to be inspired by that piece of trash movie, makes me want to shove the book at you *sob* MTV can go strait to hell!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice , this story really is unique and I like its flow I cant wait for future chapters
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Reviewed By: Princess Kill You (sound familiar?) On: September 07, 2007 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! I liked that! So creative! I'm really Da Who, but I put my other name for obvious reasons. But that was really good! You get a 9 by Da Who (and It's by calculator, too.)
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 07, 2007 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this one-shot. For this to be your first lemon, you did an amazing job. I hope you do make it into a story because I want to know what happens next. Until the next update, good luck!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: September 06, 2007 22:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you kidding me?! It was very good and an amazing first lemon if I do say so myself. And yes you should extend this into a longer story I would love to read it.
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 10:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh please make it into a story that was good! :P ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Ash. On: September 04, 2007 16:04 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story you should add some more chapters
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: September 04, 2007 15:03 PDT
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Yowza!! I have no complaints about your citrus.In fact I want more!! Sooo is another chapter going to go up? Please.
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Reviewed By: MOORRRREEE!!! On: September 04, 2007 10:15 PDT
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THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE IN MIND FOR A STORY LINE!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 23:21 PDT
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I agree with everyone else. You did exceptionally well for your first lemon, and I too wouldn't mind seeing this continued into a full story. Though as a one-shot, it does stand alone beautifully.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: September 02, 2007 19:54 PDT
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Aww man why did this have to be a one-shot? It was so good. Perhaps a sequel or another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 10:16 PDT
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Okay so I know its suppose to be a oneshot, but c'mon! You know you want him to come back for moreeee.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 08:54 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Awesome fic!! plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should continue and make a sequal i want to know what happens if he comes back. It was really good so far.
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