| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] |
Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. There is so much going on that I'm losing track of things (my fault, not yours). I'm going to have to go back and re-read some stuff. But, having said that, I still know that poor Christiano is in trouble. I just hope that Inuyasha and the others can get to him in time. And I can't wait until what is going on with Kagome and Inuyasha becomes clear. They definitely have some sort of connection (the hand thing was a BIG clue of that, along with other stuff that has already happened). I will definitely be looking for the next update.
|
Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: June 09, 2008 11:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh neat!! - i already wrote my review, but i found something in a review that i didn't notice so i had to go back and read those parts - Inuyasha can feel Kagome's pain?! that's got to be something important, can't wait to see what happens with that...
|
Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: June 09, 2008 11:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter - curious about nareks' new powers, and exactly what he can do with the blood stone - if anything. Im guessing that is was narek who found chris? You make a lot of spelling errors though. but other then that i loved it~! Update as soon as you can :) OHS
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 03:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one day?? im proud of ya ^__^ im all excited now XD Kagome hurtting her hand, pinching her arm, and Inuyasha feeling it XD OMG OMG OMG Christiano!!!! NO!!!
|
Reviewed By: FullMetalChick1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 22:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
So... Great story! I especially love the way you describe the characters in such detail! I also like that you make it clear that Kagome is average and some 'Gorgeous Babe' or something. Don't get me wrong, I think that the girl that the man falls in love with should have some sense of 'good looks', but being overly perfect is not always the way to go! Um...Oh yea, something I think that would make this story a little more interesting would be to have more scenes of InuYasha and Kagome's growing love for eachother...(if that makes any sense!XD) I just want to read a little more about their relationship i guess, but yeah, all in all a wonderful story...so good infact I could see this being a movie! So thanks for writing such a good story for me to read...I have been searching for a good one to read lately!
|
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: May 24, 2008 15:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
I just started this story and I find it very intriguing. I love how you wrote this story. I cant wait to see how you bring Kagome and Inuyasha together. Please continue writing and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
|
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 13:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
Come on girl! Bite the bit for just a little while longer and give the final push! Exams will pass too, same as the rest of time does; You'll be glad you hung on as well as you did in the end! Don't worry about the writer's block - its very normal to have in such a stressful time. A chapter for NW or BI from you are always very welcome, so take your time, tailor them, wait out the stress, and you'll see, it will all start falling into place again! This old girl is talking from experience here ^v~
|
Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 00:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well great work as always but relax and stop and breath, if you need to consintrate on school then go ahead you stories will be here when you are done. Don't worry what other people say about how long you are taking to update at any of your Stories school is more importment,ok :P. It is bout time for inu to warm up kags take her freaking out to happend :D Alsome job now relax ok the stress isn't good for you ok sweety.
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... feel bad for kagome being caught up in everything... but nice that inuyasha & kagome are talking to each other again... what or who will they encounter next... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know what it is like to struggle with writer's block and I just want to thank you for not giving up and continuing your amazing story. My finals at college ended last Thursday. Now I have the nice long relaxing break, unfortunately for me, my nice long break ends this Tuesday when I start my first summer class. Plus I'm still working at both my jobs so I was never really on vacation in the first place but anyway back to your story. So Inuyasha's family is getting suspicious of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship, particularly how they smell of each other. Is it only the non-natural Nightwalkers having this problem with Sesshomaru and Kagura, who are natural Nightwalkers, being able to smell Inuyasha and Kagome's scents more easily or are they in the dark too? Also, is it unusual for a Nightwalker to have sex with a human? I can't remember one hundred percent but I am pretty sure that after Inuyasha bit and slept with Kagome he was more angry with his loss of control, not that he had sex with her. So did Inuyasha break a taboo by having sex with Kagome or is it just an uncommon occurrence? Anyway, thank you for fighting the writer's block and posting this chapter. Good luck with finals and as always, I eagerly await the next chapter of your many amazing stories. Your friend and fan, Zach
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good luck with college, I hope things go well. Lovely chapter!!!
|
Title: chapter 22
Reviewed By: megumu192 On: May 18, 2008 10:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, can't wait to see if Inuyasha falls even deeper for her and Kagome for him.
|
Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. And good, realistic view of the trauma Kagome faces. You're absolutely right; you couldn't see the things Kagome has seen and not be affected by them in some way. I'm glad that you addressed that. Also, I'm glad that Kagome and Inuyasha are speaking to each other again. I wonder when Inuyasha is going to admit that Kagome is his mate? Everyone seems to know anyway, lol. But, then again, he is just too darned stubborn to admit any sort of "weakness" easily. I 'll just have to wait, I guess. Good story.
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 03:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
oops i meant (from the accident in the cave) that they kinda mated but anyways, ooo take ya time.. and i understand the philosophy part... i couldnt do it, so i dropped it lol
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 03:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg Kagome had a melt down.. i think i would have had that melt down ages ago... but aww soft side of Inuyasha :P when Lilliana said that Inuyasha is carrying Kagome's scent on him.. it kinda sounded like (from the accident that they kinda mated... but anyways, ooo take ya time.. and i understand the philosophy part... i couldnt do it, so i dropped it lol
|
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] |
