| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Headstarter On: July 20, 2008 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't make Chris relly be dead i liked him ...and what does Narke (sorry if i spelled his name wrong) and please when is kagome going to turn into a nightwalker!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 23:57 PDT
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*gasp* NOOOOO poor natalia! Who killed chris? Why did he have to go he was one of my favorites! I wonder what Kagome's gonna do and what about Narek did he leave her or kidnap her? Ugh soo many questions i really hope you put up a new chappy soon. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 00:17 PDT
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Wow. Wow, wow, wow. I don't even - wow. And that was only part one. It felt like a whole and complete part in it's own right. I can't wait for the next part!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 18:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! Not Christiano! You made me cry for poor Natalia! How incredibly sad...I hope that Narek just has the real Chris tied up somewhere and that Narek was strong enough to make a really good copy. But that would also be bad because then Narek would be too powerful...And what happened to Kagome and InuYasha?! The suspense will kill me! Please update soon. You're an awesome author!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts panicing* Chris!?! NOOOOOO!!! OMG!!! Narek!! god hes hot, BUT FUCK!! AWWWW *starts crying* i got school too on monday T-T OMG ITS TOMORROW!!! *still crying* CHRIS!!!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 11, 2008 21:17 PDT
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OMG Chris is dead?! i think im gonna cry! What'll Narek have kagome do??? Why is Kagome pasty if she hasn't been bitten?
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 19:21 PDT
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omg, i do hope Christiano is ok... wow, that was a bit of a surprise. well anyways, cant wait to find out wat happens next..update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Why the hell is InuYasha vomiting?
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Reviewed By: BowandArrow08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 10:12 PDT
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Whoa! You left quite a number of cliffhangers here! That was, at least in my opinion, one of the best chapters yet! I personally, haha don't like cliffhangers, but no matter how much i don't like them, they do give the story something "special", and more of a "sitting on the edge of your seat" type feel. I hope that made sense. So, even though i don't like them, i think they were well placed. Nice job! I really, really enjoyed this chapter. I think that Inuyasha is feeling nauscious because he is tied with Kagome, and SHE is the one feeling sick. You did a great job and i can't wait to see what the next part brings! Keep up the good work! And don't you dare let this story go! You have to finish it now that you have made it so good! Haha! .:.:Arrow:.:.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that they are all together again... but is christiano really dead?... did narek kill him?... really sad if he is... wht does narek want with kagome?... seems that everything was a trap... what will they do... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: chapter 23
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: June 23, 2008 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, the suspense is killing me. Does Inuyasha love Kagome and what is Lillian suspecting.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 19:08 PDT
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Oh boy that was good...I am seeing your clues and I cant wait for them to get out in the open with the faily...big trouble there...but damn this is a great story and i love how u write them so well that none of them are OOC...I cant wait for an update so if u can please do it soon please and thank you
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (School) On: June 09, 2008 20:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Kagome gonna turn into a Nightwalker and becoem the Nightwalker King??? or is the proper Nightwalker King some one we already know???? Baby teeth!!!!! Another good Chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh I did notice one clue you left, Inuyasha is sharing Kagome's sense of touch. After she pinched her arm you had Inuyasha in the next paragraph rubbing his shoulder like it was hurt. The same thing happened with Kagome's palm. So I wonder what that means? Whatever it is, I'm sure it will be good and I look forward to seeing what it is. Your friend and fan, Zach
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To answer your question in the start of the chapter, yes I am a guy, very much one if I do say so myself. Any particular thing that made me girly in your mind or just didn't want to assume anything?
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