| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2010 13:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! *Happy Dance* The formatting was a little screwy but I don't care! This was a wonderful final chapter, you definitely tied up any loose ends that I could think of. I knew Kagome had been made a nightwalker on purpose to save their lives! I too think it was fitting to end the story with Kagome and Inuyasha in her apartment, I liked that, and yeah, it looks like their relationship will work out just fine. They have a lot of time to finish falling in love with each other. Looks like the passion end of it is already there! And I absolutely did think it was funny when Kagome's parents thought she was crazy. Of course that would be their reaction. Something like that could theoretically turn angsty if you couldn't *prove* you weren't crazy, but I LOVE how you had Kagome prove herself! Don't believe me? Fine, then watch as I lift this car over my head! Believe me now? LOL. I think it would be awesome if you do make a sequel, which I wouldn't have asked for if you hadn't told us your sister had an awesome idea for one! Why the hell would you tease us like that? *pouts* So yes, sequel sequel sequel! But all in due time. There are some sequels to stories I haven't written yet, so if you have a new story idea in mind that you wanted to do first before getting back into this universe again, I totally understand. Whatever your next project is, I'm thoroughly looking forward to it. :-) |
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2010 05:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. Will there be an epilogue? If yes, then I can wait to read it. If no, then good luck with future stories. |
Reviewed By: Amazed On: December 19, 2010 21:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on any forum! Hands down, you are the best and don't ever give up writing. You have a true and natural talent and you should use it to the best of your ability. Looking forward to an update soon! |
Reviewed By: *zetsuii* On: November 27, 2010 19:15 PST
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Amazing. So happy that I finally caught up. Well done on keeping all the twists in line cus there was so many that I wasnt sure how you were going to pull it off but you did and I loved it. I cant wait for the next chapter so update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2010 10:53 PDT
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I cnt believe Kagome was the heir! Tht was a gud twist. Wats gonna happen between her nd Inuyasha? Will Chase nd Narek make another appearance? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2010 08:25 PDT
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Amazing chapter...though I did feel that the whole Kagome-passes-on-ruler-status-to-Sesshoumaru was a bit rushed. She has just realised that she is the next Queen, which is a pretty big thing, and then just hands it to Sesshoumaru just like that...like passing some inherited item to your friends. Though other than that, this was a greatly written chapter. I do hope that in the future chapters, there will be more interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. Good luck on your midterms...I know I need some of the luck. :/ And update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2010 23:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the war is over... looked like narek was going to die until chase came to save him... so the truth has come out... and after everything they finally have the ring and kagome was the one the ring chose as the heir... but then she transferred it over to sesshoumaru... looks like kagome has made a decision to return to her old life - what will happen next?... nice that kagome talked to lilliana... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2010 21:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Yay, I'm so glad the King is dead and the war is over! I think picking Sesshoumaru as the new King was a good decision. Really looking forward to the next (last?) chapter where everything else can get explained and settled. This is/was such a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: JessJess On: October 01, 2010 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please oh please update. I need to know what happens. ahhh!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2010 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read to read this all over again, seen that college took over and i forgot most things -___- BUT NO!!! NO NAREK!!! DONT KILL THE HOT ONE!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2010 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Wonderful update. I'm so glad the King is dead. Now I can't wait to see what becomes of Narek. Update again when you can. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2010 01:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD!!!! You LIVE!!!! Lol! Anyway awesome chapter. I hope they don't kill narek...and welcome back I'm glad to see you still live. ^_^
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Reviewed By: jessca On: September 22, 2010 20:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as always! Welcome back!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 03:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... still lots of action and drama... interesting turn in the fight... kagome helping out... so they were able to kill the king... what about narek - will he die too?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 09:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so someone else is behind narek's actions... who is lucy?... what is her motives?... what will narek do now?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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