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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awww makes sense why they dont go in the sun.. all i thought that they just get burnt.. LOL
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Reviewed By: Raina.. On: March 25, 2009 00:48 PDT
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Yay, a fast update. this again is my favorite story here. But.....I was kinda wondering....you know, now that Kagome's a nightwalker....wouldn't she finally see what Inuyasha ment about the sun?? I mean, I've been waiting to see when Inuyasha was going to show her since he mentioned it, but, It seems a bit unrealistic that Kagome hasn't come out at the daytime to see....??? Just wondering.
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 19:45 PDT
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THAT SOB DID WHAT!???!!! Oh how I can't wait to see them kick the kings ass!! And are you going to give a background on why koga and inu don't get along? Kagome's coming along but I hope she gets stroger faster.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 04:56 PDT
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THINGS ARE LOOKING UP.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 04:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fantastic chapter... (smiling like a mad man) Kagome's power is cool! I didn't think you would bring Kouga in, great way of doing it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 02:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is getting better as a nightwalker with her training... and she's spending time with inuyasha - they are getting along better now... nice that kagome was able to convince kouga to join the fight against the king... and also think up a plan to look for the king's location too... interesting that kouga's side already have news... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 01:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... so if Kagome's emotions are like high, then she can use the power??
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Reviewed By: r4k[nsi] On: March 20, 2009 19:37 PDT
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So I think this is one of my favorite chapters for tomany reasons. One especially being is that Kagome got a power..and if it islike Nareks than she can kill with it. WHich is SWEET. to kill someone with the painfully memories we all hold and pray to regret.. And she brings them to light. At first i thoughtit was gonna be like bringing her back tolife..cause you know how she purified things in the show..so she can purify the body of venom and things. haha who knows. but yeah awesome chapter. worth the panda eyes inthe morning , no? XD
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2009 07:20 PDT
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great chapter! i'm so sad for liliana. i mean, to be mated without consent, that's worse than rape, i swear!!! i love the circumstances though. and im just wondering... what exactly did the king take from narek? the king didn't take his *gulp*, thing, did he? that would be TERRIBLE!!! anyway... i love the short sweet moments between inuyasha and kagome. i really want those two to fall in love soon, haha! and again, i wait anxiously for your next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 03:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god Lilliana woken up!! Hmmm, Kagome can well might be able to see others memories?? Ooooo that sounds cool :P did the king took whoever Lucy was... coz it sounds like shes connected to Narek somehow... and NO!!!! Narek is mine!! ^_____________^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that narek left a mark on lilliana... what did narek say?... looks like kagome has discovered a power of hers... but the others don't know what kind it is... nice that inuyasha & kagome had a sweet moment... and the nightwalker king - what did he take from narek, his heart or something?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty too tired to go and fiddke around and remember my password and screw it up... On: March 08, 2009 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter! From what I read I don't think that their are any spelling or Grammar mistakes... InuYasha was so sweet!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad lilliana's alive! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 07:03 PDT
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awesome chapter; glad that lilli's back up again. LOVED the part with inuyasha and kagome comforting each other...so cute. update soon! kimiko
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Title: great fic!
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 06:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story a few days ago, and I've been reading it non-stop since yesterday. I love it! I love all of your original characters since they all have very distinct personalities. I like Claire the most since she's such an icebreaker. Have you read the Twilight series? Claire reminds me of Alice Cullen. I was so sad when you decided to kill off Christiano. Natalia's reaction alone was heartbreaking. I was starting to have a crush on the Brazilian vampire, too. I could kind of see it coming when Natalia died though, but I didn't think other members of the family would be killed as well. The lemons: H-O-T. Especially the one in the cave, OMG, that was really steamy. I totally dig the "sex in totally black darkness" concept now. I physically flinched in the mating chapter, when Inuyasha and Kagome were telling each other that they didn't love each other. I guess I'm a bit bothered since I'm personally a fan of I/K mush. You will make them fall in love though, right? Right? Pleeeeeease? And I think it's great that you have still managed to keep the original IY cast in character despite this being an AU. I am so sick of AUs that make the characters act so totally different from the original canon that the only similarity ends up being their physical attributes. In particular, I could just see Inuyasha being the same, keeping himself from feeding since he was so guilty about what has happened to Kagome's life since they met. I'm also kinda glad that you decided to make Kagome out as an ordinary looking girl, and not some ridiculously hot babe that most fics show her as. She was never really described as a breathtaking girl in the manga, was she? Your villains: absolutely evil, especially Narek. I'd despise him if I didn't enjoy the character so much. BTW, how in heck does Narek manage to do all those things, as in like a natural vampire? Is he undergoing some sort of training? Is it a glitch of some sort? And what the heck does he really want with Liliana? Is he the tall boy in the picture from Lilliana's box, or was he her boyfriend or something? You *will* enlighten us on this in later chaps though, right? I'm pleading now, please enlighten us. As for the King, for the first few chapters I had really thought that it was Naraku. I was totally thrown for a loop when Kagome saw him and it was described that he looked like Inuyasha and Sess. I had thought then, that maybe they were related. But to find out that he's their dad?! OMG. Sheer genius on your part. I soooo wanted Inuyasha to be the one to change Kagome at first, that I was miffed when Narek did it. But then again, I realized, if Inu changed Kag, he'd be like, her dad, right? And it would be kind of incest if they were to keep at it. Eeew. Yeah, now I'm glad it was Narek. I don't like incest very much. ^_^ Anyway, I'm sure you've had enough of my rambling, so let me sum this up… Great fic. In fact, your fic is so good, I think I've managed to get over my writer's block for my own fics. ^_^ Thank you so much for sharing this piece with us. ^_^ I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. Please update soon! ^_^
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