| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 16:19 PDT
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omg way too good of a chapter. i was so into it i was depressd when it was over. that was def the best chapter i read now i cant wait till the next. UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 16:01 PDT
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This is one of the more elaborate stories I have read in awhile. Honestly there are only two stories that I can attest to that rival yours in terms of length and overall quality and enjoyment. (I haven't slept since I started reading this story.) I have read a lot of fanfics and it has been awhile since I have read a story that captivates and enthralls me like this one has. I consider myself quite fortunate to have read this amazing story. This story in my opinion is "without wax".
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Title: what?!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 06:34 PDT
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wow...i wasn't expecting that!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 06:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasps and looks right and left and squeals* N'AWWWWWW Lilliana said that to Narek!!! and it seems like he (even if he doesnt say it back) feels the same way! a love/hate relationship... N'AWWWW!!! I wonder whats the plan Rukiya came up with... though i could never guess what she will do or thinks about lol but hmmm... so in a way, a Nightwalker child who be a shity 24/7 job... OOoo i would break down with that lol.... *squeals again* i can already see a child between Lilliana and Narek!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! have to add "Buy why her?" LOLZ?!?!?! Its meant to be but...
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAH AWSOMEEEEE CHAPTERRRR is chase still alive narek a double agent thing going on cus that would be AWsome!!! lol REALLy AWSOMEEEEEEEEE i dunno i hope they win!! keep writing as fast as you can its getting to intense not to know what happens lol
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 05:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so the warning has been issued and it's the calm before the storm... what plan did rukiya come up with... what part will kagome play... seems that lilliana & narek's pasts have resurfaced... how will things turn out now... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the battle is about to begin... what will they do... kagome sure has been thinking alot... what's up with narek... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 23:39 PDT
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Hi ji-an, I don't believe I've ever reviewed any of your fics but I'm a huge fan of Desert Rose and Nightwalker, in particular. I couldn't get this theory out of my head and I had to share it with you but didn't want to put it out on review. I just couldn't get over the idea about the whole 'heir to the throne' scenario. I figure since in later chapters you made it clear that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha were the sons of the Nightwalker king, and in Chapter 23 in a sense they family might have to wait until the heir is born to have the upper hand that possibly a child from Kagome and Inuyasha might be the true heir? But unless you have some twists for Nightwalker birth I don't know. I was thinking about Lilliana and Narek as well. I just can't figure those two out. You do such a great job on their personalities. Anyways, keep up the great writing! Thanks for reading my ramble.
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: Hanakoheals On: June 11, 2009 23:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grammar is a little off, but I'm starting to think they're just little bits you forgot to read over. That was your first lemon? That was a pretty hot first lemon lol.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 04:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great ending(you may need to put a line or some thing like %^& (something that normally doesn't come up)as a indicator of where the added part is. this way people who have already read it can see where the new part is (ctrl(control key) and f at the same time brings up search(most browsers have this or a similar search function))and be able to find the new section)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 01:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read the last extra bit, and *growls* im just like Kagome... i wanna know what their talking about?!
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Title: You amaze me!!
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I appreciate the lovely bedroom scence! Well its just i always wondered what happened to them when they went to sleep! But now i know! and in the nude!!! You must love me. I seriously cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I hope no more people die!! Well Inuyashas family anyways. I actually cried while reading all the death scenes... I dont know if i cant take much more!! Anyways Love the story! And thank you =)
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 19:16 PDT
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Oh my God, the King took Narek's EYE!!! Eeeew... Well, at least it wasn't a more *vital* part like I had first been afraid of, right? :D Anyway... Inuyasha wanting to hold his mate while they slept... that was so cute! They should totally start sharing a bed. They *are* mated and all that... I want fluff!!! ^_^ Great chapter, as always. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 06:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter!!! night...
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