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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: Spongebob5544 On: January 02, 2008 13:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........but this time make Kagome die and Inuyasha has to bring her back by turning her into a nightwalker...oH and i agree with Partymonkey22 CAN SHE HAVE A TAIL AND EARS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 00:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY GOD 'somethings not right.' that killed me!! i hope you update soon! knowing that poor little Claire is in danger!! and Kagome turn into a nightwalker... not this early people!! well i dont think.... but anyways hope you had a great new year!!
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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: Partymonkey22 On: December 31, 2007 14:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if Kagome gets turned into a ightwalker (which i hope happens)can she have a tail...OH and ears just like Inuyasha but a different color .....BEACAUSE EARS AND TAILS RULE FUCK YAE!!!!!!...............oh sorry must be the crack i tolk earlier HA HA HA HA
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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: Deja On: December 30, 2007 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur fanfic it is so gooood please make another chapter and more.....oh and i sugest that u could make Kagome into a nightwalker some how.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 12:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude you should keep writing still awesome as always
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 01:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so agree with madjax36 about comparison as a fanfic writer (and some of the other stuff as well). I think there are a few really good writers who's idea keep the readers waiting anxiously for new material to read.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 01:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is missing? is that the cliffhanger? Why do you hate Claire? (Not that I am surprised at all the world has been hating me a lot recently (its all been bad luck).)
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 19:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter(s)!!! seriously awesome!!! Please keep updating!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... so kagome will be joining them when they move... wonder how inuyasha will tell her... hope the others get to claire soon and save her... wonder how though with fenrir around... update as soon as you can... please and thank you! Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 07:09 PST
Comment/Review:
yay, you've updated! Uh oh, wat's wrong now?!? (>.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 01:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I hate that Claire got captured, though, and by the sadistic Fenrir, no less. this is REALLY bad. I hope that the others can get to her in time. As for the "confrontation" between Inuyasha and Kagome, I didn't get my explosion! *pouts* LOL. Oh, well. I guess it just has to wait. They have much more important things to worry about right now anyway. Rescuing Claire has to come first. I look forward to reading the next one!
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Reviewed By: eda 101 On: December 24, 2007 21:54 PST
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OMG i love this fanfic it keeps me in suspence I LOVE IT..... great job......but when r inu & kags gonna get together again.... wink wink nudge nudge..... and faster updates PLZZZ... thank ya
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Reviewed By: 44inu-yasha44 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 14:29 PST
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sweet lord this is one of the best stories ive read in a long time. im obsessed with it you made me practically fail a math test i was just continuously thinking about what would happen next. i feel like a loser but i rush home to see if youve updated yet. please update soom im dying here.
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Title: Genocide
Reviewed By: madjax36 On: December 13, 2007 14:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm usually a reader and not much a reviewer, but I gotta say something. I know about the Armenian Genocide. I was introduced to it in 6th grade from my homeroom teacher, who's Armenian. I also now live in a community with a very large and old Armenian population in the Central Valley of California. If you want to see a good example of how to treate the issue of Genocide, watch Nicolas Cage's film "Lord of War." Its about the rise of a a gun runner for 3rd world countries and how it affected his entire "world." His character study was very well protrayed, I thought, and it really reminded me of your character developement, especially in this story. So, for your review: I liked your premise. I like how you have a good eye as a writer to be able to bring into background discussion topics that will leave a reader asking "There was an Armenian Genocide?!?" I also like how you've portrayed the inu-ichi clan to suit this story and not make it seem like a cookie cutter cutout. That can really be hard to do. Now if you want a comparison as a fanfic writer, have you read any of Sueric's stories on MediaMiner? I swear she's an undercover professional authorise whose made fanfic writing as a way to exercise her writing brian. Yet, think, if you wanted to test out a story thread to a wide based audience, why not write as a fanfic writer? Not to say that I don't think some of her work can't be tiring after reading them in a row. That's just overkill. Its like eating a gallon of ice cream in one sitting. Its just too much, even though after 30 mins, you want more. ;) So, I guess after everyone reads this post and wonders what the hell I'm writing about, its like this; I am responding to the writer's need to know that someone other than one person, read and thought that using the Armenian Genocide as a background for character developement was a neat and well thought out idea. There said it. Happy now? Cause I can assure you that there are other lurkers out there that will be happy to say roughly the same thing. Maeve
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: December 13, 2007 14:22 PST
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Hey don't feel bad that only one person mentioned the armenian genocide in a review, I'm sure lots of people who read your last chapter became more worldly aware. They were just focusing on the fact that we had some real inu/kag romance at last. Which by the way I was very disappointed that there was nothing about them in this chapter after the ending to the last one. *sigh* oh well, just could we please have some in the next chapter. I did however enjoy seeing more of Claire, I love her!!!! ^.^
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