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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 12:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started by checking out your LJ, and the calendar there was very useful! I can't believe so little time has passed. I can't help but wonder how long this story is going to be... :) This was also a very good chapter. I didn't want it to end. I wanna know what he talks about with her mother. And I love how he scared the shit (or piss) out of Hojo! XD And I sooo want to see exactly what evil plan the kids and Inuyasha has made up! I know it's a hectic time right now, but pleeeeease update soon!
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Title: 2 reviews in one
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 23, 2007 03:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome I loved the shopping and the hojo scene was too funny. and the Q&A with kags friends twas hilarious. Well I have been so busy couldn't read anything I've been work to the bone lol. Update soon I can't wait for more limes with two hands!!!! and maybe some touches on sesshy oh and the discussion that I hope explains kagome's beast next chappie I think I sure hope so hehe well see you soon Loves Arry
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 23, 2007 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the chapter that you had posted and I must say that it was great. Especially the part where you made Hojo pee in his pants. At least Sesshoumaru didn't kill him though you could tell that he was close to it. Hojo should have know better then to talk like that even if he though he was a thug or in a gang. Thugs do hurt people and everything. I wonder what would happen now that Sesshoumaru showed Hojo some of his powers. Though like Sesshoumaru said, they may not believe him cause they might thinks he's crazy. I can't wait to find out next. Ohh and the shopping trip to the store. Sesshoumaru should know that Kagome would love him either way even if he eats raw meat. Though you did have me there when Kagome cleaned off his face I had though she might lick it off or something. Though that is kind of gross since she is not a youki. Then her friends get all flustered when around him. I would to since he has a body like a god. LOL. Just playing. I wonder what Sesshoumaru will say to Kagome's mom about the mating thing. I know she would support them but Sesshoumaru doesn't know yet. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Ohh and Inuyasha and the children are getting some pretty great ideas about the prank. Can't wait to see how it turns out. I really can't wait for the next chapter. This is just getting to good. Ohh I'm in suspense just thinking of what could happen next chapter. Hope to see another update soon and have a Merry Christmas.
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Title: *smile* Thank you!
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 00:01 EST
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I like this chapter a lot. Sesshoumaru's comment that it didn't matter if he showed his beastly side to Hojo becasue he's so nutters that no one would believe him anyay... LOL.. ROTFL... spittake on the keyboard..OH oH... I can't breathe... LOL. Hojo wet his panties! Hojo wet his panties! ROTFL... (gasp for air) (holding breath) (gasping for air and laughing again.) Nice touch having Inuyasha plan on going back to the future to get a camera so Kouga can get owned on film. Very nice touch. I hope he doesn't interrupt Sesshomaru's talking to Kagome's family, though. Poor guy just doesn't get any slack at all, does he? (snickering) I also look forward to seeing Kagome's beast again. Speaking on Inuyasha... it will be neat to see how you get his "tribal tatoos" on him. (Scratching head) I'm still scratching my head about Sesshoumaru's mark on Kagome not being in a normal place, as Sango pointed out WAAAYYYY back ago. I wonder just where, exactly, it should be? Just add it to the list of things to look forward to. That list is delightfully long, and it makes me happy because that means we have a lot left to this story. I agree with whoever it was earlier that said they would read it over and over when it's finished. I think I will, too. Thank you so much for sharing this awsome story. The suspense is half the fun. The other half is the relief... LOL.. but all in all, it's the journey and that has brought a spot of fun into my otherwise not so fun at the moment trials of life. (Ahem) Thank you. Did you ever expect groupies when you started writing this? (Grin) Merry Christmas... and may the snow faries send you a few inches before spring. Hey, the weather is wicked freaky this year... it could happen! Peace!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 23:33 EST
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Personally, I don't think Sesshoumaru would really be that self-conscious about his eating preferences, and Kagome and Sesshoumaru seem to hang on each other a little too much while her friends are around. I understand a bit is okay to show their affections, but it would probably make her friends uncomfortable.
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Title: AWESOME!!
Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME GIRL!!!!!!! I always look forward to your updates and let me say this chapter doesn't disappoint. Poor Hojo. Sesshomaru scared him so bad he pee'd his pants. I couldn't stop laughing at that one. Hopefully he will get a clue now, but I doubt it...I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up all the great work... Merry Christmas and a happy Yule to you and your family.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 21, 2007 21:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what will happen now. This chapter was a great chapter. I'm just know getting to write it because something was wrong with my computer. Ohhh, Sesshoumaru really told that girl Momoko. And she believed that she could get Sesshoumaru, haha. That was a funny part especially when Sesshoumaru told her that she was pregnant. I wonder what she would do now. Then he smelled all those men on her. That had to be one bad smell. That was cute how you made him not understand what a thong was and Kagome had to show him. I wonder when Hojo will get it through his head that Kagome is not avaliable. I can't believe that he still thinks that he is a thug. I wonder what Sesshoumaru will tell Hojo when he finds him. I just can't wait for the next chapter. This is getting really good. Sorry for the late update, I'll be sure to keep it up even if my computer goes wrong cause this story is getting to good to stop reading. I still can't believe that you are already ahead about 4 or 5 chapters that good. Your doing a really good job. Hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Ello Writer
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ello...before I start typing no i'm not Austraillian...I just LOVE how they talk all the time...but anyways...I SO F****ing LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::makes a pouting face and crosses arms over chest::You left me at a cliffhanger!! You meany::says in a joker-ish voice:: I really do like it though!! I've been reading it for a long time now and found out that...I JUST CAN"T GET ENOUGH!!!!!!!!! And when you stop updating this story I WILL KEEP READING IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh...Yeah...Hi...I'm your NEW FANFIC BUDDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really do Like the designs you described of the markings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well please have a WONDERFUL DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This keeps rockin! i really like where your going with this.... but wheres Naraku been hiding all this time? so keep up the great work that your doin!!!!!
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai On: December 20, 2007 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I'll just have to suck it up and grab onto my patience with both hands and wait for THE LEMON. Thank you for the "wifebeater" explanation. Your description was so true and hilarious. So all it is a plain old T-shirt. Before I became an adopted Texan 25 years ago, I was a 100% hillbilly. I know those shirts well. Especially the rolled up sleeve on one side, making it like a pocket to hold a pack of cigarettes. I come from the hills of KY and TN. Kouga = dumb and dumber; Hojo = dangerously delusional to the point he could harm Kagome. So eager to see what Sesshoumaru does to them. As for the children, they have me on the edge of my chair waiting for them to go into action.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 02:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* You should write crime novels! You are great at depicting a maniac. You seem to know just how they think. Are you sure you are sane yourself? ;) Can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru does to the poor guy. XD
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 19, 2007 20:53 EST
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Waaah!! Don't stop there. It was just getting good. Seriously though, the chapters since I last reviewed have been great. I love the way you gave Sessh's arm back. It was perfect. Even the pain. If one thinks about it, it would hurt like hell to regrow a limb like that. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what the Band of Nine are cooking up for the stupid wolves. Speaking of stupid, do unicorns live in Hojo's little world? Will he be riding one when he rides up to save Kagome? I'd almost pay money to see Sessh have a little "talk" with Hojo. Please update as soon as you can. Tis a fine tale ye be telling m'lady.
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Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 20:41 EST
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*whips out a glittering sword* Avast, ye fool!! *swings at the lunkhead* Ye twit for brains! Ha-ah! Take that! And ThAt! AND THAT! *konks Hojo again and agian and again until he resembles a nail in the dirt...rumpled head of hair and crossed-eyes and all!* *wipes brow with back of hand* Whew! That was fun! XD Now... where's this Momoko-person? *creepy eye scan of the area* Never fear! I shall find ye, ya block-headed git! Ye traipsing lug o' trash! Avast! Blast ye!!!!!!!! *goes swinging off on a handy vine that appears mid-air!* *pips back in* Loved the chappie, chap! Wait up for me! Sesshy!!!!!!!!!!!*is gone again in a flash of glitter and poofy smoke!*
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see exactly what Sesshoumaru does to Hojo. I hope that Hojo is too scared to play off of Sesshoumaru's insecurities... Being as off kilter as he is for now, he might let that affect him... And I'm glad that the kids did some spying. Maybe they won't be too harsh with Genta and Hakaku if they were able to notice that they were questioning Kouga and not enthusiastically plotting with him. ...maybe
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 19:19 EST
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Holy Cow! You had me laughing all through this chapter. I LOVE what you had Sess say to the school whore. That had me snickering out loud. She asked for it! All this tension is building and building... I may have to turn on the A/C as this keeps going. I love the anticipation. Keeps me checking back for more. (grin) Hojo's never going to recover from the "conversation" coming up. I just hope Hojo doesn't inadvertently press any hot buttons with Sessoumaru. (on the other hand... the chance for comedy.... ahhh... LOL)
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