| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 21:31 EDT
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I do hope you come back to this story some day, I do like it so. Until then, enjoy your siesta and thanks so much for sharing your imagination with us.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What Kagura did was fantastic! finally she gets free!!!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I'm gonna miss the updates. But I think you're doing the right thing. To keep up the quality, if a break is required, then have one. Wouldn't want it to be rushed after we've gotten this far. ;) By the way, the first part with Naraku in this chapter... It was kind of hard to understand if it actually did happened, or if he was just fantasizing. As you wrote "He'd" instead of just "He" at some places. I hope you understand what I mean. :)
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Reviewed By: Moon_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 03:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, as much as i luv luv luv your story i'm just gunna say take your break. if your not happy with the story, we're not gunna be happy with the story so honestly take as much time as needed just come back to us please!
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Tatika [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think your using the lemons to fill space, I think its perfectly natural, especially for newer couples, wanting to be close and all. Overall I really enjoy this story and happyily await the next bit.
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Reviewed By: Bethany On: March 08, 2008 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the flow of your words, the way you explain things and the interesting story line. I absolutly love this story. Take your time getting your flow back I know how it is when you get blocked. I write myself. Great job with the fanfic so far, Im lovin it though you probably already guessed that. LOL!!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved Kagome's reaction to the news reel. LOL! The Kouga pranks continue.. and this was the best one yet! I'm so glad to see Kaugra get a break. Even though she's one of the "bad guys" I don't really hate her as a character. I patiently await for the next installment. Thanks for sharing the art links.
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Title: She Who Prophecy
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mean we had to wait?!?! But-but-but!!! I love this story! And your other stories too!!! Oh man!! :(
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Title: Happyness
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blushes* Everything you write is so beautifully done, I can't even think of anything to say that would properly show my feelings about this story. I have been following you through the updates, and I am extremely happy for you. Reading this story, for some reason, makes me feel some-what better about myself though I am not the shape of kagome or have a man of my own. It sounds strange especially if it does not relate to me, but it's sort of like my inner self has dreaming of the day that I would feel anywhere near as special as her. Feeling love from reading is amazing, and the author has beautiful gift. Something in me is always pleased by these chapters so I would like to thank you deeply for the chapters that always brighten my day. Thank you, wonderful artist.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 01:17 EST
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Its still monday isn't it...am I wrong I can't remember...WHY CAN'T I REMEMBER!...*pout* hmmph......Well to bad so sad for Hojo...Haha Momoka and Kyo they don't get what they want XP......Is Sesshoumaru going to ask her at the party on friday that would be so koo and romantic, though it would take like forever at the rate that Story is going...but again not a bad thing just two to three chapters a day is a long time.... almost like a real day XP.....I'm still worried about Sota's dream though, I may have a good idea as to whats going to happen but I'm still anchious cause its only a guess and I don't know how your going to make it unfold...*pout* unfair....*pout*..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nami no Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. The limons are good but sometimes it seems like you are using them to fill in space. Please don't take this as a flame. I have to say, you have an exelent way of abusing Kouga. The Sap'n'Feathers was great. I cant wait to find out what happent to him next.Its like kicking Jaken but funnier. Do it again!!Do it again!!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 05:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee. With this many lemons in a chapter where they're not even mated yet. Imagine what future chapters will look like. ;) Smut all the way, baby! XD
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 03:48 EST
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AH!! This story is still really good even after taking a couple months off from reading it! I can't believe they're STILL in her time!!! I feel SO BAD for the kids! It must be torchor for them! AH! SAD! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 04:12 EST
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I couldn't stop smiling one of my goofy smiles the entire time I was reading this.....hehe....I love what you did with the blood test.....poor little dog indeed...hehe....is that going to be ont he News too?? I wander what Kagome would think about her blood actruly being canine blood....I guess she could already guess the changes but actruly have demon (dog) blood would defently be a bit of a shock I think...who know really......aaaa poor insain Hojo I wander if he remembers what happened yet....I wander if they would let him go free if his mind completely blocked that out for and extended period of time......that would be interesting................I'm still worried about what Momoka is planing cause I don't any thing bad to happen T-T......I know that Sesshoumaru would not go with her if his life depeneded on it and that goes for Kagome with Kyo as well, but I can't help but worry, so now that the school day is over Kagome has six and a half days left untill she returnes home this is going to be a Long week I think not nessarly a bad thing I mind ya............. Now I want to take a guess at something...when Kagome finaly gets back to the feudal era and the Pathers bring her the shard to be purified, somethings going to go wrong and it will take Sota to stop her from toching it........am I right? Wait don't answer that I want to find out in the story.....as long as you update soon and let me know though the story that is....X3........Myah....Update soon please.............Nyuka...Meow
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:51 EST
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Nice. I never thought that you would make Kagome an inu. I can't wait to see how this progresses. Great job. ^^
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