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Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found that part with Sesshoumaru incredibly sad. He's scoring these notes looking for any and all trace of her and when he does...I mean, he's done something so heart-felt for her, and Kagome carelessly writes a couple of jokes with her friends, not knowing the impact she has on him. I understand that she wasn't doing it to be malicious, but I have to wonder if she'll ever realize and truly understand the impact she (unknowingly) had on him. I just thought the picture you painted of Sesshoumaru in this scene was so poignant, so heartbreakingly sad. I appreciate the slow-build up, however, of their current romance, and I appreciate the struggle that Kagome is facing as she tries to make the right decision for all parties involved. I think the story is much more dynamic because she doesn't simply fall into Sesshoumaru's arms and accept the mate bond and accept him. They both have suffered past hurts at the hand of the other (whether they know it or not), and I think that the balance of flash-backs and the present scenes really help to establish both their growing relationship, and eachother. I love how all the characters are developed (Sesshoumaru especially), and think you've done a great job portraying honest friendship (between Kagome and her boys), and developing realistic, believable love between two seemingly different people(Sesshoumaru and Kagome obviously). I think this is a great story, and look forward to reading more whenever you have a chance to update.
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 00:44 EDT
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I hate catching up to the author lol. but really really love this story. :) thank you, oh and I personally love the flash backs
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 13:37 EDT
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OH MY GOD!!!!!! IM SO GLAD YOUR BACK!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2010 13:36 EDT
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Awesome Chapter.It's nice to see that Sesshomaru has a romantic side. Loved it and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 21:54 EDT
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awwwwwww. too fun. Kags getting in on a joke on Sess, and then getting flowers from him. hehe. she's going to get a lot more once he realizes how much she loves them. This was a very VERY well written chapter. Hope life's treating you well. -DD
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 20:13 EDT
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Aw, Sesshoumaru wrote such beautiful notes. *sniffle* Kouga really pisses me off though. That was a dirty trick that Inuyasha played on Sesshoumaru. Can't wait to see what is happening in the present; hoping for angst. Heheheh. Thanks for the update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: KittyKittyCat On: January 29, 2010 13:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep waiting for them to finally get together and I thought they finally did and I was so excited... but they didn't you tease =( update soon pls
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: kiku902 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2010 03:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow just wow xD that was fucking great!-lol pun intended- i cant belive you just left us with another cliff chapter! PLEASE!! dont make us wait so long for the next one?! At first i thought you where going to end the story all i could think was "nooo dont end it its such a great story dont let it end dont let it end!!!!" LOL im glad you got back to this story dont get me wrong i LOVE your other works but this one is by far your best! (that i love) FANTASTIC work!! keep it up!! - Kiku
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 23:08 EST
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WELCOME BACK!!!! AHHHH that was so hot to find out that it was just a dream. . Great work Keep it up
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So now they are sharing dreams because of the Syndrome? Cool. Awsome chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 14:55 EST
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LOL, wow that was HOT! Nicely written and very evocative. I'm glad to see you writing again on this fic. Hope to see another chapter soon.
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: CrystalAmber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't get it. At first, she knows the perverted monk, then she meets him at school without knowing who he is. Then, she sees Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha at the school, not knowing who they are, when she already knows them... Can you explain? Awesome fic, btw. Sorry, just didn't understand what is happening...
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 06:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soooooooo much. I love SWtPF just as much and hope you get around to continuing it soon. And I like how you do the back and forth thing in alternating chapters (although it does leave the reader on edge waiting for what's next in an almost desperate manner) but there's one question I have, dunno if you read the reviews but I'm hoping you do. My question is, where is his tail? In chapter 16 when Kag's first saw Sesshy in the perusal of his uber-sexy body (and I don't care that he's not real! He's uber-sexy!) It mentioned his oh-so-cool long tail but in every other chapter (even during his dating experiments) there is no mention of a tail at all. I mean if I was any of those girls the tail would be the first thing I'd go for, then the markings, etc. And seriously, he is Sesshoumaru, he has to have a tail or some fluffy thing like in SWtPF, lol. Just thought I'd ask that/mention it. And hope you put more mention (of his beloved tail/or lack of tail) in the story. I love all your stories and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonTruthMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 00:56 EDT
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Hey! I'm a new reader and oh my gosh! I absolutely love your story!!! I just caught up to the end and I can't wait to see what comes next!!!! Update soon please!!! =D
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 15:36 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for The Syndrome for the Third Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
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