| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So now they are sharing dreams because of the Syndrome? Cool. Awsome chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 14:55 EST
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LOL, wow that was HOT! Nicely written and very evocative. I'm glad to see you writing again on this fic. Hope to see another chapter soon.
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: CrystalAmber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't get it. At first, she knows the perverted monk, then she meets him at school without knowing who he is. Then, she sees Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha at the school, not knowing who they are, when she already knows them... Can you explain? Awesome fic, btw. Sorry, just didn't understand what is happening...
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 06:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soooooooo much. I love SWtPF just as much and hope you get around to continuing it soon. And I like how you do the back and forth thing in alternating chapters (although it does leave the reader on edge waiting for what's next in an almost desperate manner) but there's one question I have, dunno if you read the reviews but I'm hoping you do. My question is, where is his tail? In chapter 16 when Kag's first saw Sesshy in the perusal of his uber-sexy body (and I don't care that he's not real! He's uber-sexy!) It mentioned his oh-so-cool long tail but in every other chapter (even during his dating experiments) there is no mention of a tail at all. I mean if I was any of those girls the tail would be the first thing I'd go for, then the markings, etc. And seriously, he is Sesshoumaru, he has to have a tail or some fluffy thing like in SWtPF, lol. Just thought I'd ask that/mention it. And hope you put more mention (of his beloved tail/or lack of tail) in the story. I love all your stories and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonTruthMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 00:56 EDT
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Hey! I'm a new reader and oh my gosh! I absolutely love your story!!! I just caught up to the end and I can't wait to see what comes next!!!! Update soon please!!! =D
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 15:36 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for The Syndrome for the Third Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-Girl On: October 22, 2009 09:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor baby. I feel sorry for the Sesshomaru and Kagome back then. They were so not confident and fearful of rejection that neither saw the attraction that, if Jakotsu's few minutes were anything to go by, was obvious if they'd only looked. Well, I'm glad you updated. This was a good chapter. I wonder how the next present timed chapter will go? Hmm... Poor Sessho needs to get some. four and a half years? *shakes head* You better help the boy out. ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2009 09:11 EDT
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heh. very very funny. gotta love the teenaged ability to misread body language and emotional cues. I kinda know how Sess feels though. I went to my prom with my best friend and her (then) boyfriend (now) husband. Feeling like the third wheel is never fun. But Sess did that one to himself by showing up alone and being obvious about it.
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Reviewed By: Dreamer778 On: October 21, 2009 22:56 EDT
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I'm in love with this story!!!!!! Please keep up the great work. I can't wait for the chapters about the present kagome and sesshomaru! Those are my favorite!!!! Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 19:35 EDT
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Oh, Wow! An update. You must be feeling better. *hugs* I'm glad. That was a nice chapter, very angsty and it focused on my favorite character. ^_^ I love the interactions between Kagome and Jak. They get along well. I like your portrayal of him. Thanks so much for posting! Can't wait to see what's happening in the present! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sakura-shi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good grief, you're killing me. But I'm hooked like cheesecake flavored crack.
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 10:22 EDT
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MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you need to write the rest of it and get it all up soon or i think i will explode!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, now I'm on pins and needles... is that really Kagome that just hoped into Sesshoumaru's bed? I don't know... it just seemed a little odd to me. Poor Sesshoumaru though, all the torture he's been through. Amer
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Reviewed By: Sakura-shi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 17:43 EDT
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*SQUEEE!!!!* Of course I love it and of course I have to whine that it's taking entirely too long for updates and this story to finish already! I know, I know... I should know better but I'm so anxious to find out how things go! It's your fault, really, making it so great and all... ;)
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Reviewed By: nowyouseemenowyoudont [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 16:01 EDT
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somehow i doubt Sesshoumaru is going to say 'no' to Kagome's last question... hehehe. i'm so glad you've posted another chapter!
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