| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lilswtheart398 On: June 06, 2020 15:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!! I HAD NEVER READ THE EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ughhhhhh that was sooooo goooood. I couldn’t put this down. I’ve
been up until 3am some nights just reading. But Geeeezus that
epilogue!! Poor Valerie!!! I can’t imagine having 4 Evan’s let
alone 7!!! O.o. I’m still so so curious about Gunner. I really
reallllllllllllllllly hope you write his story. Gosh I remember
waiting anxiously for every update on this story. Allll 228? 229?
Chapters. As I did with ALL of your stories, but I still maintain
that this is my favorite main purity story. ((Morio’s is probably
my favorite of the side stories)). For some reason I thought Marvin
had cheated on Valerie and she grew the ring in his face. Crazy how
much you forget in 10 years
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Reviewed By: Lilswtheart398 On: May 24, 2020 09:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay a few chapters in, and wowzers Evan. Forgot that it’s been
almost 10 years since I’ve read this, but there is no doubt in my
mind that Valerie wouldn’t have nailed Maddy and Evan to the wall
for the pictures they took and passed around. I think so much has
changed since this story was written, and certain parts are making
my feministic qualities stand on edge. I know Evan is a big ole
sweetie, and I know that the women in his life never regret the
lovins he gives, but I wouldn’t have been surprised if he ended up
in the me too movement. Also V’s boss. What a TURD NUGGET!!!!
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Title: ::thumbs up!::
Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2018 23:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your writings! You are such an amazing story teller. I'm
very jealous hehe. So I read this story first, was kind of confused
but loved it nonetheless, went back and started from the beginning,
fell in love with it more, and then new characters were introduced
and I wasn't following along apparently. So my question is, exactly
in what order do you read your stories with the "in between"
stories included?
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Title: ::thumbs up!::
Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2018 23:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your writings! You are such an amazing story teller. I'm
very jealous hehe. So I read this story first, was kind of confused
but loved it nonetheless, went back and started from the beginning,
fell in love with it more, and then new characters were introduced
and I wasn't following along apparently. So my question is, exactly
in what order do you read your stories with the "in between"
stories included?
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Reviewed By: nabooru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2016 01:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your fanfiction for a long time and I am a huge
fan of all your work but I think Subterfuge has got to be my
favorite. I'm really going to miss reading about Evan but I'm
really looking forward to your future stories. The Purity series,
Metamorphosis, Chronicles, all of your fanfictions hold a special
place in my heart and even when I'm eighty years old I'll still be
reading about InuYasha and Kagome, Gin and Cain, Evan and Valarie
and all of the beautiful characters you've created in your
incredible Purity series. Thank you so much for bringing these
characters to life for hundreds of people to enjoy for many years
to come. You are truly an incredible author.
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Reviewed By: floopyloopyoopy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2015 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you thank you for coming back to your readers despite all the
hardship you've been going through! I have loved reading this story
and am so sad that it's over (although kind of relieved to see the
end!). But like any life, there's always more after the "happily
ever after". I hope there are more stories to come so we can get
glimpses of where the others are! Plus you keep hinting at stuff
and you know you can't leave a smoking gun on a mantle without
explaining how it got there. XP But thank you again for a beautiful
story. Reach out if you need help, as you bring so much enjoyment
to your readers' lives!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2015 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG. I can't believe it's over! You know I love your
writings. You're an amazing author... and just just FF! I look
forward to reading anything you toss out there... plus, I re-read
everything occasionally because it's all AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: Anime Fan9568 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2015 08:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
I can't seem to download this story
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Title: Doggy Style
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2015 23:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
LOL, oh man, I'm gonna miss this story. It has made me laugh till I
cried, cry like a baby, given me warm fuzzys like no other story in
your arsonal. I love the way your mind works, and it is a delight
to see your voice again. I look forward to your next post.
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Title: call it fate
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2015 20:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
I had just started rereading this again when I saw you email
notification. I swore I was hallucinating lol. How are you feeling
how's the family I hope better. I'm beyond estatic that you've
returned I was lost without your unique storytelling skills :)
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2015 15:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been so long since I've left a review, and I'm sorry for all
the troubles you've had this year, but I am glad that you're
doing better and you were well enough to write! ow, this chapter is
probably the most anticipated one in this whole narrative and it
doesn't disappoint! The sense of completion in Valerie and Evan's
relationship is really comforting and it's really fantastic how the
point of view floats between family members especially one as close
as this one. All in all, this chapter was really a treat to read
and it feels good to be leaving this review for you. I actually
very much missed you. In any case, it was lovely and I'm very
eagerly awaiting the conclusion.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: m84dani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2015 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Loved reading this series and was bunmed when you stopped
updating for awhile, so when I logged in to read the latest
chapters for a different story, imagine the big WHOOP I let out
when I saw a new chapter for Purity 9! Awesome sauce! Sorry to hear
about the hardship you and your family went through, especially
about your daddy, but happy that things are picking up for you
guys. Hope you keep writing, and can't wait to read more stories
from you! Thank you!
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Title: Since Day 1
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2015 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's crazy, I've been following you and your stories for years!!! I
remember when you first started writing Subterfuge... I immediately
fell in love with Evan and Valerie! This chapter, as usual, was
amazing. As well as the rest of your writings. I'm SO glad you
haven't given up on fanfiction writing, and it's wonderful see that
your back. When I saw the email that you updated, I was like, no
friggin way! I'll always be a fan of yours... Always. Would love to
know what's going on in your life though. Until later.
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Title: Glad you're back
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2015 20:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
But i'm sorry to hear what's been happening too you. Wonderful
chapter as always.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2015 20:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
I AM SO HAPPY YOU'RE BACK! When I started receiving updates in my
email again i nearly flipped I got so excited!!! I checked your
website but there were no updates as to what was goin on with you
now. I have some pics from deploymemt to show you too. Great
chapter I'm so glad Evan's story will get closure and i cant wait
to read more on mikio amd madison. Btw i reread Alex's gift a few
times! I love it! I'm reading coming home at the moment. I
purchased all of them to read while i was on deployment.
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