| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 13:44 PDT
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This story is really good! i've finally caught up with you lol cant wait to see what happens when she runs into Zel at the fundraiser!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 12:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i cant wait for the party!!!! when valerie meets the "real" evanXD something tells me shes gonna have a hard time recognizing but then the shock of the whole thing when he tells her whats going onXD lol=D good job on the story=D and thanks for the update=D
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 10:12 PDT
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OMG i figured something out! They've had sex before! Valerie and Evan in the prologue chapter of this story. she was the girl with the honey blonde hair. yay me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the tootsie pop i was eating helped me figure it out. that and all ur chapters have a purpose. and you wouldn't write a chapter about random sex unless it was somehow tied into your story. don't tell me if I'm right or wrong i want to find out through reading if I'm right. but can u please clarify if Val is youkai or not
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:56 PDT
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oh ur so evil! that was a wicked wicked cliff hanger. will evan and valerie recognize each other? i cant wait for the next chapter. but i have a question thats been bothering me for a while now. i thought valerie was youkai. is she?
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:52 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:34 PDT
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OhGeez... I mean, Marvin sounds nice and all, but you really shouldn't marry a guy who will always, ALWAYS place you second or third. Come tot hat, I can't WAIT for Evan's reaction when he sees her all dolled up, true colours and everything...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!!! Oh, oh oh! Now it's starting to make sense. I can't wait till Evan gets a load of her. I wonder if she'll bid on him. Man, you really are sneaky!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 08:50 PDT
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So the same party huh? I wonder will Evan growl when he sees V with Marvin? And how will she feel when someone wants to grab Evvie for a little night cap? LOL Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 07:56 PDT
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...they sold Bas? How the hell did they get him to do that?
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 12:07 PDT
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It's very good so far! You never disappoint, and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 21:26 PDT
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How come I have a feeling that Evan and Val (and Marvin, can't forget the blind idiot) are going to the same charity event? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 19:52 PDT
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I am really interested to see this fund raising chapter. It proves to be very interesting!! Until Monday though!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 16:25 PDT
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aww how cute!! Gin selling her baby boy for CHARITY!! *happy fangirl squeal* lol keep up the good work! I LOVE THE STORY! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 13:05 PDT
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Great chapter! Keep it up and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 10:37 PDT
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I've never gotten what anger Evan holds against Cain. I mean he is his father. No he's not exactly like his parents or brother but there's plenty of cousins who he can identify with. But you'll give us some insite to this won't you sue? Please say yes I'm itching to understand. Grea Chap loved the "family" moment. And even though Evan thinks that Cain doesn't understand him he knew enough to get him to agree to being sold. LOL
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