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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 17:08 PDT
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I'm just curious. We've all decided that Valerie is the girl from the prologue, and if we're right, I have just one question. How is it that Evan doesn't recognize her scent? I know in the first bit he thinks about how he can't smell her b/c of all of the incense/drugs in the house, but I didn't think this extended into the bedroom. "The smell of her was dizzying, inebriating, lingering in his nostrils like the crisp wind of a winter's gale" I thought this was him smelling her scent.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 15:38 PDT
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Oh, Sue! You ended it there??!! So not fair! Lol. Dang I really can't wait until tomorrow now! Lol. I love how you string us along with these stories like this, though, keeping us on our toes! :D
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 13:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg soooo good!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter=D
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 12:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy hell...how is he going to explain this one. She would never be fooled into thinking that Evan and Zel aren't one and the same. Will he introduce her to Gin? It's all so exciting. Will he figure out who she is? Ahhh!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 11:27 PDT
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Ahh... so Val's gonna get a chance to meet Evan Zelig, rather than Zel Roka? Loved the little mention of SesshOmaru, BTW. *fluffy fangirl squee*
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!! I love this story! (my reviews are so lame)
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 10:03 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 01:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore your fanfiction. But I love your originals even more and I was wondering if there was any chance that another chapter for Jinxed is on the way? Thanks for taking the time to read this message!
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 22:51 PDT
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Couldn't get onto the forum and thus had to resort commenting here. *sigh* Anywho, I am just giddy w/ anticipation. Can't wait to see what happens next. The fact that both Evan and V are going el natural makes me so happy. In my opinion, natural is always better. Plus, this will be the first time that V gets to meet the "REAL" Evan Zelig, not Zel Roka. Ooh! Can't wait! Thank you so much!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 20:44 PDT
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Go Val! Shock the heck out of everyone there! Wear that new dress, Wear your hair with natural color, Wear heels! And buy Evan!!! Ha! Take that Marvin!Heh, or have one of those 'bachelor buys himself for pretty girl in audience' moments like in the song! An' I said, hey, pretty lady, won'cha gi'me a sign I'd give anything to make you mine all mine I'll do your biddin' an' be at your beckon call Yeah, I never seen anyone lookin' so fine Man, I gotta have her, she's a one-of-a-kind I'm goin' once, goin' twice, I'm sold! To the lady in the second row She's an eight, she's a nine, she's a ten, I know She's got ruby red lips, blond hair, blue eyes An' I'm about to bid my heart good-bye! --Sold (The Grundy County Auction Incident) by John Michael Montgomery Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOH!! Valerie and Evan are going to be at the same shindig! Will Valerie soon learn the real Evan? Will Evan recognize Valerie at the fundraiser? What will become of their relationship after this? Well we shall see in the next chapter of PURITY 9 : SUBTERFUGE!! LOL can't wait! :D
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 15:33 PDT
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Okay, Marvin really needs to be punched for that! I really can't stand it when people plan stuff and then break them at the last second. Hmm...so this next chapter should be the gala event right? I can't wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: 3427 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 15:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fairly certain Valerie is the girl in Prologue wonder if it is similar to the Ryo-Nezumi story, where Ryo can't remember the details of his encounter with Nezumi in the beginning.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 14:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So they are both going alanaural for this even... I wonder what happens when she meets Gin?
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heck yes! Go Val Go! Poor Evan's in for the ride of his life.
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