| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so very good! You really are a talented writer. ^_^
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! Another update! Keep 'em comin'! And I'm likin that dream/vision, by the way. Can't wait to see where you go from here!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another update! I'm glad Inuyasha and Kagome are both starting to think along the lines of getting their relationship back to where it should be. That was some major hell they both went through, but they love each other. I know it'll all work out in the end.
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Title: Inuyasha's almost over :(
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 05:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hardly have to review anymore, cause I almost feel like I've run out of complements and jokes for this one. However this time when I opened the link for this chapter I saw that the status said complete I almost had a heart attack. In my head I was like "But, but, but, isn't there supposed to be more or something" I had to keep chanting to myself as I read its just a mistake there will be more its not over. So I was relieved that the ending authors notes said the same. I'll be waiting and hoping that they can work things out soon.
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Reviewed By: Tyshia On: March 16, 2010 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story for the past couple of days (neglecting my school work and midterms) and thought I had reached the end and would have to wait for an update when, to my surprise, you uploaded a new chapter right as I finished the last one! :) This story is nothing short of fantastic, and I'm really looking forward to following it until you finish it. Keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 04:43 PST
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Great chapter! I actually felt bad for Inuyasha at the reunion with their friands and Kagome's family, but that was expected. I hope that everything will turn to the best in the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 23:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the revisions. Of course, I liked it the way it was before, too, but the alterations make sense. Mrs. Higurashi's part in Kagome's room especially was probably better this way, and I like how it then made it Kagome who actually put the pieces together herself instead of her mother coming out and explaining it to her. It also makes more sense that they didn't start making out right after the mud scene, especially since you're still having them be awkward around each other now. Now their awkwardness seems more natural, and less youkai-based where there would seriously be something to worry about, as was my previous assumption. All in all, I like the small changes, and I really like the new chapter. I think everyone is acting fairly realistically, all things considered. And slick trick with the well, making it that they have to go together, so none of that being separated by time business, and they have to have a jewel shard, which will spell disaster when it's finally time to purify the jewel. I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Keep up the good…no, check that…great work!
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: ~~KAT~~ On: February 14, 2010 20:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, I've read alot, ALOT, of Inu fanfics,a nd my fav was always "From Friendship to Love" But this has by FAR become my new fav. Please keep updating, I read it all in one sitting and am dying to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: dudeeeeee! On: February 12, 2010 18:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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whoa! that style of writing rating was an accident, it's totally supposed to be a 10!
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Reviewed By: dudeeeee! On: February 12, 2010 17:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLYYY FCKING HELL!!! THIS STORY IS WICKEDD IN THE MOST AWESOMEST SENSE OF THE WORD!! dude, you have to keep writing, like seriously, you have given me a reason to believe this website isn't turning into crap. Please don't disappoint me by leaving it hanging. I think i might actually create an account to keep tabs no this fic. update soooooonn pleaseeeee
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 09:31 PST
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whoa boy! things are starting to get a little cold, but i hope that it wouldn't get icy between them. i wish that all will be good in the end.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 00:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man... Clearly, their newfound anxiety around each other is some kind of side effect from their mating. Youkai mating is a mysterious thing, after all. Feelings of betrayal must be causing their youki to subconsciously reject one another. But then that would only affect Kagome...because Inuyasha was desperate for her to forgive him. Hmmm... At least they haven't forgotten that they're mates! They both realize that it's scary and wrong to be feeling the way they're feeling. That, at least, is definitely a good thing. They each hope that whatever the problem is will go away. Perhaps they should just 'suffer through' sleeping together to see if that fixes the problem. Of course, that's probably too easy...and also might not work at all and only make matters worse if it were forced. I know you have your ducks in a row, so I shall wait as patiently as humanly possible to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 23:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know maybe the problem that they are having stems from kagome losing their child. Having a miscarriage can put a lot of strain on a relationship even more so if they don't talk about it.
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 20:06 PST
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Havent read the chapter yet but it looks like sadness is coming... boo =[
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Title: 1st Place Winner!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 08:35 PST
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://jaimed1968.deviantart.com/journal/29840759/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Dec09/ First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
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