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| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 13:12 PST
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Y'know, I was actually really surprised that you didn't have Kagome's youkai form comment on the compromising position he used to restrain her in chapter 17. xD I don't know why, I just expected that to come out of her mouth instead of the hanyou comment. I hope Inuyasha doesn't become an ultimate baka and just let that statement keep festering like stagnant air between them... He would wouldn't he? -_- Anyways, I am literally on the edge of my seat to know where this story will take us (and them). Hopefully I'll remember to drop a line here every now and then! ^^
| Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 05:49 PST
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nice keep it up
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 02:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic...
| Title: phbb...only eight days
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eight dry days in the fanfiction desert without a drop of Metamorphosis to drink, how cruel you are o-evil author, dark master of fangirl torture. Please spare us further pain, with another update and a inu smooch!
| Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 20:23 PST
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I liked the part with Tamiko, even if it was a little dark. I also like how Inuyasha like seeing Kagome begin stealthy. Hehe. Although the issue of what Kagome said hasn't been addressed yet...but I feel like Inuyasha probably hasn't forgotten... Anyway I can't wait to see your next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 18:11 PST
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lol, made me giggle... it was a good follow up chapter, but hurry now and get to the good stuff...
| Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 16:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What do you know? Just as I finished the remaining chapters, I realized that you already updated! Lucky me :) And it was a great chapter just like the others. Very beautifully organized. I very much enjoyed the inner thoughts of Shippo and Miroku. Shippo's musings about adult relationships were just as they had to be--filled with childlike innocence and because of that, really amusing. I liked the kissing part as well, but honestly, for a moment there I expected him to slap her. That would be uncharacteristic of Inuyasha, and I don't know why I expected him to do something like that. But I did. Well, kissing her was also not something he would normally do, but there was nothing normal in their situation now, was there? I really wonder what you will do with that 'filthy hanyou' comment. I expect nothing good would come out of it, but nevertheless, I'll wait for you to surprise me. Until next time!
| Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 01:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got an idea about that full demon word vomit from Kagome...it will be interesting to see if I'm right on that. Unitl next time nice smooch and tease!
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 04:16 PST
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i loved the angst of this chapter. kagome has always said that she loved inuyasha just as he was, but now she has to be able to love herself in order to live up to those words. what a wonderfully complex twist! the absolute dichotomy of her new nature was brought out so well in this chapter. now you just have to find a way for her to be able to live with it. great job.
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 03:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter... a very nice beak from the Manga I have been reading (7 Seeds) from stoptazmo.com... Its a what would happen if you were trapped on a Island what *number* items would you bring with you... I'd bring InuYasha... because then you have some one with experience... oh and I I also recommend "Of Strings and Kevlar," by Selina MacCloveror I've been reading it as well... lol writers are also fans too!!! I loved these lines!!! And from his understanding, his attraction to girls was nothing unusual, just a sign of him growing up. Maybe the more you liked girls the more grown up you were? If so, then Miroku was the most mature man he ever met. That didn't explain why the monk couldn't get a woman to bear his child, though… Trying to figure out adults made Shippo's head hurt. On paper, things appeared so simple. When they were old enough, men and women fell in love, got married or mated, and…did something together that nobody had told him about yet (1). Whatever it was, it must be something really good or really bad for the adults to keep secret. And somehow, he knew that mysterious something was a large part of the reason why the relationships of his friends were so strained at times. He thanked his lucky stars that he wasn't grown up yet, and that he didn't have to worry about any of that stuff yet. After all, he hadn't liked girls for very long. When he was younger, living with his kitsune family, most of his playmates were boys his own age. Girls were sissies, too wimpy to play with the boys, and to be avoided at all costs lest they rope you into playing some girly game with them. But now… "I'm not gonna eat you, stupid wench!" Apparently yelling had been the wrong strategy, for the girl simply collapsed into a ball and started crying for all she was worth. Shippo took a deep breath, mentally berating himself. Great, baka, now she's even more afraid of you! And did I just call her a wench? Inuyasha would be proud…
| Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 20:27 PST
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I love the balance of comedy, romance, and angst. And I really love the way Inuyasha made her feel better, with his comments about how they were alike and the hug. And the kiss was really creative to! I love the reference. I can't wait to see how the filthy hanyou thing will be resolved... Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 18:56 PST
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beautiful, the chapter was beautifully written, it showed mirokus realisation and kagomes turmoil, maybe even revealing something more about kagomes demon side... i dont know, either way, hurry up... please?
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 14:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better! Srsly! This is lyk, my first ever favoreted fanfic!
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 04:22 PST
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i continue to enjoy the wonderful story you are creating. you have a very natural and easy writing style that raises the readability factor. seeing how differently kagome handles being a hanyou than inuyasha deals with it, brings up many questions. is it because her personality would naturally react to adversity this way? or is it because her outlook on life has already been set? it could even be due to having company in her situation--a guide who's been through it all before and can help her over the rough spots. whatever the reasons, it gives them both a chance to experience the other's life a little and will serve to bring them closer. i didn't get a chance to review the last chapter, but after reading the author's note about the sword i laughed out loud. the parallel you drew, combined with inuyasha kissing his sword and saying how much he loved it was great.
| Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story today, and I was planning to wait until I finished all the chapters to write my comments, but oh boy, this chapter made me throw that plan out of the window. Honestly, when I read the title 'Role Reversal' and figured that it was about the night of the new moon, I thought that Kagome would use her new powers to protect a human Inuyasha. Never in a million years could I guess what it was really about! That was hilarious! I can still picture his face while she carried him over her shoulder. Marvelous! Since I started commenting, I must say I found the idea of 'rebirth spell' definitely brilliant. I don't remember reading anything like that before. As for your writing... I get the idea that you already think you write good, so I don't know what to say except that I agree with you. I'll probably be leaving more reviews as I continue reading the already posted chapters, so be ready to hear from me again, and thanks for sharing this story with us!
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