| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wing13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 18:13 PST
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Omg! i loved it please! please!! update i want to find out what happens, your very good at writing i might add. Please keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 02:00 PST
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Wow. I never thought I'd see the day when Inuyasha pulled a Kikyou. "If you want to be with me you have to be human. Oh and did I mention by 'be with me' I just mean just hang out because I have no intention of actually marring you." Damn. Kagome needs the throw back in his face that he is behaving like Kikyou and hey why not even suggest he use the dagger on himself so that he can be human since he values being human so much more than being hanyou, and then he can run off with Kikyou and have half clay-pot, soul-stealing children. On a different topic, we STILL haven't seen what the dagger looks like. And if it is a "dagger that doesn't cut flesh" how was it causing "Thin red lines appeared on her legs and arms, and small rips in her clothing"?
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Title: Sorry for the double post. ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 23:16 PST
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Lol! You know I kind of like it when kagome leaves the group for awhile. Let Inuyasha suffer while he looks for her.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to say this but if I was kagome I would say "fine then goodbye I'm going home". And hand all the jewels to him and leave. Of course he'll go after her. But it is her body. And it IS her decision to make not his! If he can't accept that then well...to bad. He can't force her to become humane again if she wants to stay a hanyo.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 22:18 PST
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I agree with Little Red! Kagome needs to put that boy in his place! Although I know hes thinking about what he thinks is best for her, but if she really wants to stay a hanyou he should allow her to. What part of her only worrying about his acceptance did he not understand?!?!?!?! -angryfaise-
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 19:15 PST
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Oh My God! That was the most hardcore ending ever! You have to hurry up and update! I'm going to be fuiming about that for weeks now... "I lied..." God that's bull-crap! Please, for the sake of my happiness, update soon... I don't want to stay mad at Inu Yasha forever...
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Reviewed By: Soveriengty on old computer... On: March 02, 2009 06:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic! I really loved the last part... some of the examples of the best parts: "Tell me, Aoi-sama," he said, surprising everyone with his politeness. "Is this tool a dagger that doesn't cut flesh?" The youkai's eyes widened in shock. "Yes! You have seen it?" Inuyasha scoffed. "Seen it? Try gotten stabbed with it!" "Ok, Inuyasha, you're the boss!" "Keh. Sometimes I wonder…" Kagome snickered; her plan had worked to perfection. A year and a half of dealing with Inuyasha's "separation anxiety" meant she was quite good at getting what she wanted while letting Inuyasha think he'd won at least a partial victory. In reality, she had only wanted two days at home. But it was fun to let Inuyasha think he was the boss, even when that rosary around his neck and her own fiery personality clearly said he wasn't. "Inuyasha," Kagome said darkly, "it's my body. You can't tell me what to do with MY body!" Inuyasha shrunk back slightly, and for a moment Kagome thought she had gotten through to him. That is, until his next words passed his lips. "You're right. I can't make you change back. But there's only room for one hanyou in this pack, and it ain't you." Kagome felt tears spring to her eyes. Never in a million years had she expected to receive such an ultimatum from the man she loved. Nearly heartbroken, she tried once more to plead with him. "What happened to accepting me no matter what, without question?" A long, uncomfortable moment passed, and Inuyasha's face hardened into a nearly unrecognizable mask before he finally spoke in a voice barely above a whisper. "I lied."
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 05:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please dont make us wait to long fo the next chapi, I want to know what happens. Does Kagome Leave, Does InuYasha follow. Do their relation ship fall appart, Does Kagome cave and turn back human? (which I dont think she should do, but hey its still possiable right?) Write more soon I want to see what happens K.
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Title: please master your worm begs for mercy
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 01:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that silver haired dog. Alright alright Inuyasha isn't real so I can't slap him for that at the end, but I really really wanted to. You know like "What were you thinking stupid" kind of slap. Well now I'm chained to the fangirl torment wall, nice and smooch deprived, I hope my pain is amusing your wicked wicked muse into updating again soon.
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Title: Ultimate baka, indeed...
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 00:41 PST
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Damn you, Inuyasha!!! >( *slams him over the head with a block of wood, Jinenji's mother style* He should know by now that lying won't work against her fiery temper... Interesting development, though! I'd better start building us all an ark to ride out this sea of angst. =) Oh, and thanks for the fanfic mention, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! ^^ Hope to read a new chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 23:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! No fair! That was a horrable cliffy! You have to update soon! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 22:38 PST
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oooooooh ouch. Oh Inuyasha, you need to work on your verbal skills. Kagome is going to be heartbroken after this. However, I really love all the drama (as long as it all works out heh) and I can't wait to see how Kagome reacts and what Inuyasha is going to do with her reaction... Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: Inuyasha no BAKA!!!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 22:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he's such a jerk! can't wait for the next chapters! i want to see what explaining that idiot has!
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 14:40 PST
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Oh yes, and a good fic you might enjoy reading! =D "Lessons" by Feudal Dream Demon
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: February 19, 2009 15:01 PST
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I really am enjoying this story. I can't wait until the next chapter!!!! I really want Kag and Inu too hook up soon. Anyway since you didn't have any stories to recommend I have 2 for you. One is Transformations by Dragon'slover on ff.net; its a long one but very good and she has some art work on dv to acompany it. The other is Journey to The City of Endless Night I don't remember the author's name but its easy 2 find by title. Its posted on here and @ aff.net, I really like this one but its not finished even though its already about 80 chapters long!!!! Anyway I hope u like them ja!!!
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