| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter! (very funny Robot Chicken ep too...) poor Sango... Miroku better get his act together...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! Man...what is wrong with miroku? I hope shippo is okay. The people in that village needs to be taught a lesson.well as for the people that hurt shippo...Enyone who harms children should be killed or at least burn their village down and make them suffer! They are worse then the demons they hate so much.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 21:06 PST
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omg shippo! hurry hurry hurry! update update update! (sorry, after 4 hours of math my brain is fried, but i did read it and i liked it and thats what i thought when i got to the end so yeah... update soon! and dont hurt shippo!)
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 19:49 PST
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wow at the end there was a really jarring image. For some reason I imaged him dead first.... poor Shippo!! I like the added Sango/Miroku parts and the Inuyasha Kagome fluff. Hehe. And I like how you're giving the"enemies" personalities. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 13:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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As soon as I saw the chapter was titled "Pulse" I did a little jump for joy. I love the moments when Inuyasha regains his abilities and kicks some butt. I love love love this story!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: January 26, 2009 23:50 PST
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This is a pretty good story. And I did guess that Inu was gonna change back just in time. The title Pulse kinda gave it away with how his body pulses just b4 he changes back. I really hope u keep Kags a hanyou, I've always really liked that idea since it gets rid of lil problems. Like the fact that Inu is gonna WAY out live her, plus any kids they have would only be 1/4 youkai which is a depressing thought. OH!!!! And I totally knew the Shreder reference was a TMNT thing. I LOVED that show when I was a kid. My sis and I stole a tape with some episodes on it from my mom's job when I was 5. Still had it till about 4 months ago when my vcr ate it. Anyway sry 4 blabbing on like that update soon and ttyl ok ja!!!
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Title: cool beans
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad everything worked out in the end... I'm going to guess thats not the end of tweedle dee and tweedle dumb. I'm looking forward some romancing between Inu and Kagome ;) (quit being impatiant, impatiant people)
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 21:15 PST
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i thought for a second there you were going to have Kagome get jealous over Inu Yashas attention to Sango... it would have been interesting, but im glad you didnt...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter... (I read it over an hour ago but had to leave to go and enrol in a temp agency that has taken over the contract for where I work (but only to find out that they have finished for the day as no one booked for the last session (helps if it want on Uni enrolment day and IF ANYONE knew about it... not that I should expect that...) Two whole chapters!!! Kagome is now wonder girl, I wonder what Miroku is going to do...
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 18:49 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed that very much. I liked the fact that Tessaiga helped bring InuYasha's youkai back to where it belonged, just like his youkai helped Tessaiga in the manga. Your misdirect worked until I saw "pulse" and I knew what was bound to happen - and I'm glad it did. InuYasha may be cute as human but he certainly doesn't like being stuck that way any longer than is necessary. good chapter and I look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 19:51 PST
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i feel a little cheated... i was so excited because there was another chapter up, but it took me all of 10 minutes to read it...
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 14:41 PST
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What the hell, I've been following all your fics since the beginning yet I haven't commented??? =0 *slaps self* I am so lazy! xD Anyways KB, you've done it again! Another magnificent chapter with the right amount of angst, action, and laughs. Ohhhh, I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder if Miroku and Kagome will save Inu and Sango! I wonder if Kagome will have any memories of going full youkai! And now that I know what that dagger's supposed to do, I'm all the more worried about those siblings... Augh, the suspense is killing me, man! xDDD I hope you update soon!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 06:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more give me more and soon
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 21:44 PST
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oh my kami-sama. i loved it. please you have to update soon. very soon. miss cricket get antsy when she has to wait. (and yes she knows shes referring to herself in the third person.) please update i'll review more often. i'll do anything. PLEASE?????? ~*crys*Cricket42
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 22:12 PST
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Congratulations King Baka -your story Metamorphosis has been nominated for Best Romance: Inuyasha/Kagome at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ktshabatie
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