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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice twist! Although I can't say that it's good that Inuyasha got put in jail necessarily....I'm so glad that he didn't get drunk! Muso, though, is a manipulative piece of work! I don't know how they're going to stop him. I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I thought the chief was against Inuyasha and other demons but after his talk with Inuyasha I think that the Order would have an ally in him. Too bad Inuyasha didn't tell him what the problem was and rally the police in support of the Order. It was well done to have Inuyasha misinterpret Kagome's emotions and reaction to his temper tantrum. He so often misses the mark in understanding human emotions that it stayed true to his character that he would guess wrong on her feelings. I am enjoying this story and look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: August 21, 2009 17:16 EDT
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YOU UPDATED YEAH!!!!!!! im so obsessed with this story XD!!! it's so good! i was actually hoping for a kiss, but the ending was still excellent! keep up the good work XD! i hope inu and kag will start relizing how much they mean to eachother like really like like ;) hehe. I really hope You update as soon as possible pretty please XD secret
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Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2009 01:10 EDT
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YAY! Happy days! This is GREAT! I LOVE this story! I'm SO excited for you to have been nominated! I'd definitely vote for it! XD
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 23:00 EDT
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aww poor Inuyasha and Kagome. I'm glad he didn't end up going to the Tap. :) And I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 16:55 EDT
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O no this is not good. Inu cant be backtrackin on his drinkin problem. He had been doin so well and then something like this happens! Ugh stupid mayor. Well update soon i need to kno wat happens next! ~FoxyLove
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 02:10 EDT
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awww Inuyasha was doing so well, and then this happened. I wonder if this will totally hurt Inuyasha's chance of recovery if he gets a drink? And how Kagome with fix it? I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work as always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 14:45 EDT
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WOW!! that had to be the best chapter you had yet. The way you broke down Inuyasha was sad, but oh so real. I really don't want him to get drunk, but I know that in real life backslides happen. But still, your writing has improved alot from this whole story! I really like your style and hope that other stories will follow!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 20:10 EDT
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TT^TT NO!!! inuyasha don't get drunk!!! ahem.......that was unmistakably the best chapter I read! The dropping of the bombshell the tears of the characters, the drama and emotions, such a rampantly amazing chappie. I swear this is the greatest story that I have read recently!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: July 24, 2009 16:55 EDT
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CRAP Muso is getting a little to corupted. and inuyasha and kagome are getting closer, AWSOME! kagome has amazing patience, i envy her :P. but i hope you haven't given up on this story it's such an a original story. I lOVE IT SO MUCH! and i hope you had a wonderful trip XD secret
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Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 04:03 EDT
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Damnit Muso and your trickery!! I SHAKE MY FIST AT HIM! Grr... But yay for Inuyasha! WHOOP WHOOP! Kickin' Addiction's butt everywhere >D Now I shall wait for the next awesomely-awesome chapter
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 10:38 EDT
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Hooray! You're back! Your writing is just so comfortable to read--it sucks me right in every time! Leaves me waiting for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 23:38 EDT
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Oh the plot thickens! Destroying a defense branch is a severe action. *nods seriously*........but then again the fluff is just too awesome! Great chappie! Story is getting really good!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 23:05 EDT
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holy crap! such suspence... i love all of the inu yasha kagome fluff, and the bit were he told her that he would remember napping on her lap... i felt the happiness bloom in my heart, beautiful. and sango happy? fantastic! i could just see her humming away, former bitch turned kitten. and muso... well let the political scandal ensue...
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Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HE CAN DOOO IT! Yay Inu-Yasha!! Boo Muso... Political lying skank! Oh well, it's all part of your genius plot line Buwahaha...
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