| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 04:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering how Muso was supposed to secretly be working for Naraku while his campaign revolved around "Unity under peace". Of course, put away your weapons, I should have known... That way nobody (but Inuyasha) will be able to defend the city when he's ready to strike. Now all Kagome has to do is keep our favorite hanyou on the right track in his recovery so that by the time all Hell breaks loose, he'll have discovered new reasons why he should fight. Excellent story so far.
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Reviewed By: transatlanticism [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 01:54 EDT
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I am so thrilled with this update :)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 23:56 EDT
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it took me a while to read this chapter... i kinda passed out in the middle of it... dont mis-interpret though, it wasnt because it was boring. far from it... no, i just hadnt slept since the day before it and was 6pm of the next day... anywho, very exciting, inu yasha begins his journey, and muso's plot begins to unfold... cant wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 15:45 EDT
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Aww poor Inuyasha. It looks like this is going to be harder than he thought. And now he's getting more addicted to smoking... I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work. :)
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Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, how could I have waited to long to read these latest chapters!? Holy mother of apple sauce, I'm so excited!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 07, 2009 03:52 EDT
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I know i just reviewed, but i just finish rereading the whole story again, AND I REALLY HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!!!!! it just keeps getting better and better everytime i read it. Inuyasha and Kagome are getting so much closer then they even relize. i love that in a story! its so beautiful XD it seems so more real. but at the same time i hope they relize it soon enough. love secret
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I guess not all presents are in wrapped gifts after all. That was great! Really glad to see that progress in him!
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: RipVanWinkle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its Rip Van Winkle from eternal. Thanks for the email, took me a bit longer to finally get around reading it but, just wow. This story is so great,I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: torileee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 01:26 EDT
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I really love this story, I havent read fan fics in a while and I'm so glad this is the first one I read :) I haven't been able to stop (which is terrible because I have exams :S)
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 03, 2009 20:57 EDT
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THIS STROY IS AMAZING, I love how you bring in little things form previous chapters to the later. it maskes the story seem all the more real. and i love evry minute of it. it's wonderful and so beautiful, there's so many things about it that i can't describe how wonderful this story is, it's a story that everyone should be recommened to read. its that FATASTIC!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristin M On: June 02, 2009 23:43 EDT
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When InuYasha asked Kagome to help him stop drinking, it almost sounded like a proposal...!!! And his first Christmas stocking! So cute and sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 21:57 EDT
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awww that entire chapter was so sweet! I love how Inuyasha was so overcome with emotion that he finally figured it out! But I guess this is just the beginning. I can't wait to see how Kagome will help Inuyasha stop drinking. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 21:18 EDT
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Inu figuring it out was unexpected. Have to say i almost forgot about that. Guess that was the point though probably. I guess that means job well done :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAH! Yash FINALLY gets it. I am so glad that he finally sees that he deserves more than to spend his life drowning in himself in liquor. The whole Christmas "morning" scene was just sweet. They clearly love each other so much, even though it's still in that sweet and innocent stage. Yes, Yash finally valued himself enough to wnat stop drinking and start living again. But, I wonder if Kagome realized just how much Inuyasha bases his future happiness on....HER. When he described being happy again, he went on and on about how he wanted to share things with Kagome outside of his apartment and that he knows that his drinking limits that. I wonder if EITHER of them even realize how significant that is. Kagome was so happy that Inuyasha finally loves himself enough to want to quit that she didn't notice. And I don't think Inuyasha has any idea how much he's already allowed his life to revolve around Kagome. This story if TERRIFIC. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: June 02, 2009 18:53 EDT
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I'm smiling a big goofy grin after reading this chapter!!! I'm soo happy he figured it out that he had to quit for himself so he could be happy again!! It was soo great!! I loved it!! You never disappoint!!Thanks so much!
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