| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: viking1843 On: January 10, 2011 06:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what a nice way to start a year, with a new chapter of my favourite author :) I like that Bulma is getting her groove back! |
Reviewed By: PrinceVegeta88 On: January 09, 2011 06:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story, it is very well written, I feel that you have perfectly captured Vegeta's nature which few writers ever manage to do. You've taken your time instead of rushing into the intimate parts, you've built a growing relationship with a more natural progression of how a two hurt souls can come together. I love how you keep with the inner monologue of Vegeta's conflicting feelings, your style has a very Dexter-esc feel to it, and I am eager to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2011 18:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see Vegeta's next move, and how he struggles with the urge to avenge Bulma, and what that realisation means to him. I can't wait for the new chapter! I read this last night on my Blackberry because my brother hogged my laptop, and I was writing a review, but the spam filter letters weren't decipherable because it was distorted. But I've come back today to tell you that I'm loving this new chapter, and I can't wait to see more. The interaction between the two main characters are awesome! |
Reviewed By: IfYouOnlyLovedMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 18:03 PST
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Ok at first I thought I wasn't going to be able to get into this story, but after I read it you got me hook! I love the organicness and suspense you have brought to it. I truly appreciate taking the time to write such amazing fiction! please update soon!! I can't wait to see if Bulma will actually be able to kill her killer or not! |
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: January 05, 2011 09:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last! Another absolutely amazing chapter! Thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter :D BTW, the spam filter is messed up. It's almost impossible to see what the letters are! Took me 40+ tries until I found one I could kinda read. |
Reviewed By: princesstracybrat On: January 04, 2011 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is totally original. I love every part of it. I need you to finish it. I would love to know in detail exactly what was done to Bulma in her time with the killer. I think she should remember and tell Vegeta . Please let me know when you add anothjer chapter. princesstracybrat1@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 10:52 PST
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YAY!!! im so glad to see the update! as always extremely well written and creative! keep it up! and sorry to hear you were ill..hope u get completely better and that next semester goes easier! good luck! |
Reviewed By: pisq On: January 02, 2011 04:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Thank you for updating!! I can't believe Bulma is thinking of killing this guy! |
Title: thank you
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to thank you for updating. I hope you are feeling better. This chapter was a nice little treat for the new year. I loved this story. You are an amazing writer. Your talent is beyond words. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting patiently for the next update. |
Title: ellisande
Reviewed By: ellisande [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2010 19:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO!!!! I have literally been waiting for years for this chapter and can honestly say it was worth it. Thank you soooooo much for updating! |
Reviewed By: danceindark On: November 24, 2010 02:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love vegeta in chapter 11!! and I love how you are pacing it out between the two, it makes the excitement last longer! I hope you won't finish it with chapter 12 like your other recent stories! make it longer cause this is good stuff :)) |
Reviewed By: Kinky-Typo On: October 30, 2010 18:41 PDT
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Wow it was smoking at the start of the chapter! Love the sexual tension. :)
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: October 13, 2010 23:09 PDT
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Now things are really starting to pick up. Can't wait to see how you weave the serial killer more into this piece.
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Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...that was amazing!!! omg! ur fantastic! i have to know what happens!! anyway u could update more frequently? please? for me? and the hundreds of people reading...and im sure more are constantly joining...PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: chewy booey On: October 08, 2010 01:29 PDT
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Dude, I got chills throughout this chapter. In a good way in the beginning, and in a freaked out way towards the end. Absolutely amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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