| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2003 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. Vegeta was sooo IC that I had to laugh a few times while reading this chap. He certainly is the master of sarcasm and threats :D. It looks like now he has good reason to worry about Bulma's safety. Trunks, I'm sure, can take care of himself. Can't wait to see how the rest of the story developes. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mr Peepers On: June 30, 2003 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job, once again! You know you're good when other authors are reading your stuff. You are in good company with Little Ninjin, Phantomscribe72 and Valeyard awaiting the next chapter. I am too. |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: June 30, 2003 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Great fic! It is fun to read and stays in the spirit of DBZ. Ember, you're one entertaining lass!
Write On!
-Rascal |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2003 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Veggie-kins misses his Bulma so much ^_^. It looks like the genius has definitely been there and left a sales rep in her place. She might very well be in another part of the galaxy by now drumming up business for CC. Super update Ember :D. |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: June 22, 2003 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me going, Ember. I thought he had found her at first. Loved the conversation of the hologram, so unlike Bulma and the fact that he has seen the weakness of just rushing in to a situation. Anxious for the next chapter to see if Vegeta goes to the ball and if he finds the real Bulma soon. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: June 21, 2003 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very much enjoying this... I have to say that I think it would benefit Bulma to see the way the creatures of the universe cower and respect Vegeta... maybe it will help her to understand what he gives up living with her, instead of having some say in the way the universe is ran. I think he should surprise her at the ball, and maybe it should happen when the higher ranking officers of the ship show Vegeta the respect of a royal. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 18:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
UUUUPPDAAAATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I loved the line when Vegeta says how dare she prostitue her body ! *FALLS OF THE CHAIR* HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH SO FUUUNYYY!
UPDATEEE!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! The trouble that Bulma causes Vegeta... she's lucky he hasn't already killed her!
Another awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: aikochan On: June 16, 2003 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is completely awesome! and ive been reading it slowly cuz i was hoping you'd have some more chapters done before i finished reading them all. pllllleeaasssee continue this a.s.a.p!! i cant wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2003 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great chap! That and the fact that I got thru to MMO so quickly like the good old days ^_^. Anyhoo, I loved the martial arts lesson and the fact that Trunks thought the family crest was an anchor :D. I love it when he pisses off his daddy like that. Did Veg really see Bulma? For someone who supposedly didn't care he took off like a bullet :P. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. Again great job and Congrats for getting the gold. You deserve it ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: June 03, 2003 01:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! Bulma taking off into space was a nice twist. Vegeta and Trunks are cute together. Please post again soon. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 02, 2003 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!!! And I actually got in to review!!! I love the way the plot is building... I can't wait to see where you take this!
And congrats on the gold!!!! Remind me never to make you angry.... |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 19:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm. I wonder where you got some of those stances, Ember? ;) I loved this chapter, because we get to see lots of interaction between Vegeta and Trunks.
Even though Vegeta may seem like he's coming across as tough on his son, I think you've also shown his devotion to Trunks (Jeez, he brought the kid, after all!), and obviously he's still very devoted to Bulma!
Congratulations on your Gold Medal, BTW! I knew you would do well, Kiddo! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: June 02, 2003 19:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
THank God u updated and Congrats on ur Medal!!!!
Loved the chapy!! it was funny and loved the tecnical martial arts stuff very very cool!
DId he really saw Bulma!!!!!??? Im dying here !!!
so update sooNN!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 30, 2003 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, that was very interesting. It seems Veggie has some a major guilt trip named Bulma. I loved his pov but I must say I'm concerned as to why Bulma is in the condition she's in. Is it disease or foe? Guess I'll have to wait for the next chap to find out. As always, great job ^_^. |
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