| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: NBSVEGE On: September 02, 2003 07:19 EDT
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Farlo... no WAIT I'll call him Fucker since thats what he is a FUCKER!! HOW THE FUCK DARE UUU CHoke my baby. Oh vegeta What the fuck is going to happen now!! OH kill me GOD! EMBER PLEASE UPDATE@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM DYING ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY.. WHY DID YOU END IT THERE!!!! Ahhhhhh!! UPDATE FAST!! Please.. I must read more of this wonderfully written epic! Your beautiful play on words... what ARE you doing writing fanfiction! Get out there and get published gurl!!! YOU GO.. THIS ROCKS!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another fabulous chapter! But waht about Trunks??? I need to know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 08:20 EDT
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Oh my...what's wrong with Bulma?
Vegeta's Blame...no way!!!
*If not for Vegeta*, Bulma would have die when the Androids came...*if not for Vegeta*, Trunks would not have been born...Goku would have died from the heart virus and the Earth would have been destroyed!!! Don't get me wrong I know Vegeta was an *evil* creature...a product of his enslaved and tortured childhood, but once he was free, he had a choice and he chose not to *kill*...he had a chance at a new life, he could have gone back into space...back to the life he had known. He couldn't...a bluehaired onna had reached past his barriers, the pain and the hate... to the man beneath and touched his soul!!! Bulma was his salavation as he was hers... *nods heas*...Yes I know being associating with Vegeta is a very dangerous thing, he has a lot of enemies and he thinks about these things, but he can't live his life alone...so I guess he's just going to have to protect her.
Sorry...don't know what came over me...these were just my thoughts as I read this chapter...
I am wondering...what *is* wrong with Bulma??? Well she be happy to see Vegeta when she comes to??? Will she regain conciousness???
Waiting.............................................................................................................................................................................................. |
Reviewed By: LS On: August 02, 2003 03:25 EDT
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My favorite part is when he can see the sunlight reflecting in her tears {gorgeous visual}...and I love when she is rubbing her thumb back & forth as her palm lays flat on his stomach...and the way he senses the 'electricity' between them...affecting him, coming from her...These details make this chapter so beautiful hmmm...You do such a nice job conveying his inner-reactions to her...[all the little signs that he is in love...and how those distinct indications frustrate him...hehe...so cute ^_^]I look forward to finding out what happens next. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: July 31, 2003 09:50 EDT
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I think this is my favorite chapter so far! I loved the flashback. Great job! |
Reviewed By: jess On: July 31, 2003 00:14 EDT
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OH MY well she'll wake up and then what... some v/b moments...hee hee |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was intense! Vegeta is a little guilt-ridden, huh? Well, we tend to reap what we sow...
Another great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 10, 2003 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job don't forget to update!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 15:40 EDT
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Uh oh. Things are looking a little tense. Hopefully he'll get to her before that other guy does. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 03, 2003 16:57 EDT
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That was exciting! Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next installment. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o
I would not WANT to be Bulma right now...
Great chappie |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 17:52 EDT
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*sobs wildly* How could you tease me like that?? *Wails* It's just SO MEAN!!! *Sniffles* The title clearly says The Commanders Ball... and there was NO sign of my precious honey lamb - let alone any interesting body parts... *cries again*
Ahh well - despite your callous toying with my delicate emotions, I really enjoyed this chapter... I can't wait until B and V are re-united... O.o
*spork, spork*
(let's see if my first attempt at HTML tags works...) |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 16:26 EDT
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Yep...I was right anothe Awesome chapter!!!
Vegeta went a little overboard...don't you think? He should have just burned it into the wall with his ki...Hahahaha!!! Vegeta's so funny...he has control then he just loses it...wonder how the onna will react to this latest display of 'temper'...especially if she has made friends with the Commander...that assuming this Faylorn character doesn't get to her first...let's hope Vegeta makes it to her first...
The suspence is building...I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I've been really busy the last fews weeks, but know that I will always read and review this story...
Waiting............................................................................................................................................................................................. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 16:03 EDT
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Well!!! You've done it again...another excellent chapter...actually two {I'm a little behind} I haven't read 13 yet, but I know your work and it Awesome!!!!
Vegeta seems to have Tunnel Vision...focus only on getting to Bulma, he forgot his son...hahaha!!! I can laugh, but it's really isn't funny, but then again it is...hahahaha!!!
The Prince of all Saiyans is so wrapped up in getting to his mate that he forgets about his son. I would say that Bulma has a pretty good hold on our Prince...I wonder if 'she' realizes it...???
At least Trunks was all right when Vegeta made it back and was having fun like a kid should.
I wonder how my copies of Bulma are running around out there? I'm assuming the look alike was a robot of some sort. You may have explained and I just missed it....hahahahaha!!!
Someone has been asking questions about any remaining Saiyans especially the one that destroyed Frezia...the plot thickens...who is he and what does he want?
This was an Excellent chapter...I loved the way Vegeta discovered a little more...the hold Bulma has on him...he truly does love her...
Moving on the chapter 13...I hope he has his cape to go with his Royal armor...
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