| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 03:45 EST
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Your fic is so much more than lemons. That's why we are hooked. You do a wonderful job on drama; it's so interesting to see how both Bulma and Vegeta are affected because of how they acted towards each other on earth and then because of Trunks's kidnapping. So great job. Sorry for not reviewing often. I'll try to correct that mistake. ^_~
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: January 23, 2004 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! Now let's get this ship fixed and get back to Earth. And what IS master Suh up to? Under Piccolo's watchful gaze, I doubt she'll get away with it!
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72-Carla On: January 21, 2004 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job on a tough challenge. God, you know I loved the B/V scene... you write them so well, with seemingly so little effort... It would make me hate you if I didn't love you so much *grumble*
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: January 07, 2004 21:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a super job with Piccolo's POV! You should consider doing a story for him. Worth the wait, as usual! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 03:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy to see my favorite couple are alive, fully functional, and acting normal. Well, at least normal for them. LOL. The kissing scene was sweet and funny, and of course the banter between Bulma and Vegeta was excellent. I love lemons, but I'm glad you didn't include one in this chapter... I think it would have been inappropriate. Also, I enjoy reading Bulma's and Vegeta's POV. Master Suh's might be interesting, but I could care less about Piccolo's. Sorry, he's not one of my favorite characters, and I'm really only interested in Bulma, Vegeta, and Trunks. Speaking of Trunks... Looking forward to your next chapter. ~Gail~
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 17:27 EST
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Hey Ember, I finally got that fell to swoop! :D I was so waiting for them to finally kiss! It was so sweet how you incorporated it into this chapter. Hmmm. I want to focus on Vegeta! ;) I've given up trying to guess what you're going to do next, because you always seem to send your fics in a different direction from what I had envisioned; but you fill them with so much action and adventure and passion that I immediately forget my ideas anyway. Now, we don't want little Trunks to be permanently warped by this separation from his parents, so I think you better reunite them pretty soon, ok? :D
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: December 04, 2003 09:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm soo glad they're back together! Now, who would want Trunks? I have my suspicions, but I'm not telling! I think Piccolo is a great idea!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: December 03, 2003 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least everyone's awake and acting sane again. Another great update and I eagerly await the !next
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Piccolo's definitely a good choice. Then again, I'm writing a Piccolo/Vegeta. I'm biased. ^_~ Really liked this chapter. It didn't need a lemon. In fact...it was better with just the touching kiss scene. Bulma and Vegeta have come along very far in this fic. I'm excited to see where you take them. And the visual with Vegeta sitting on the precipice was nice. I could just see that. Wait...I have see it. Thank God for doujinshi! ^_^
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Title: Chap. 20
Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 30, 2003 10:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! It just gets worse (and that's better for the reader!) I love it. I'm voting Master Suh. . .just to be different.
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Reviewed By: subu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 01:35 EST
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I really don't care which point of vieuw you're writing, but for heavens sake, let them talk. I mean I've been reading your story for ages, and I can't wait any longer. What will they say, now they finally seen each other, after the big fight on earth, for the first time. Anger, hate, love, what will it be? please updte asap.
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Reviewed By: saiyanchick On: November 23, 2003 04:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I great story so far I think you should continue in Bulma's POV maybe some glipses of Vegeta's POV would be good.
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Title: ch.20
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 22, 2003 02:38 EST
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Curiouser and curiouser....I can't wait to learn who is lying, Rian or Master Suh...{I'm wondering if there is a little truth on both sides?? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out ^_~)What a cliff-hanger...*gulp* I don't know who's POV I'd prefer, I am enjoying them all *^_^*...I will wait patiently for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: November 20, 2003 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I am so wrapped up in this story... Excellent job... again... And you know I want you to do Vegeta's POV.. you do that better than anyone.
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Reviewed By: TrunksChick19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 16:05 EST
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DO VEGETA'S POV AND PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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