| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Title: feeding genius
Reviewed By: whit On: November 12, 2003 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was a VERy different fic and i loved it nice job and i hope that VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTA AAAAAAAAAAAA and BBBBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLMMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAA get back together and to a little hanky panky oops how did that slip out oh well im sure everyone else does to so add next chappie
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 10, 2003 15:32 EST
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Oh my, I wasn't expecting that! Now why is he on EARTH I wonder? This can't be good. . . . Thanks for adding me to your update list.
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Title: chapters 18 & 19
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 04, 2003 00:44 EST
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Another two intriguing chapters, yay! I like the way Bulma can't help bristling w/ jealous and possessive feelings whenever Master Suh seems too familiar w/ Vegeta...hehe (& I like that Master Suh [realizes] acknowledges that more than Bulma's pretty face is the draw for Vegeta's affection & attention. ^_~) I like when Bulma is seeking solace by holding Trunks' blanket to herself. I can't wait to find out what 'Ashora' means ^_^. In chapter 19, my favorite part is when Bulma is 'breathing in the air that was sweet with his beautiful musky scent' hmmm *^_^*...(& later, when she sneaks a few hours of sleep next to his sedated form)...I am wondering what will happen when they land on Mantion ...I'm wondering if that little moment will be the calm before the storm?? Or will he see her and bring himself under control quicker than we anticipate?? hmmm ^_^ So many questions...I look forward to finding out what is next to come.
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Reviewed By: NSB! On: October 30, 2003 20:23 EST
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WHAT THE HELL HOW IN THE HOW CAN TRUNKS BE ON EARTH!!!!! UPDATE EMBER IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!! WAKE MY BABY UP TOOOO I MISS HIM ALLLLLL OF HIM!! LATER!!
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: October 30, 2003 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter again =) I really want to know what Master Suh meant with 'Saiyan Ashora', but I guess we'll get to know that in awhile. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! I can't believe you snuck this out and didn't tell me! Wonderful! Please let Veggie-chan heal quickly. *bats eyelashes* They need to make up!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 (2 lazy to log in) On: October 17, 2003 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My poor Vegeta! I am sobbing here! Another great chapter. I don't know how you do it!
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: September 30, 2003 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story. I can't believe I found this story only a couple of days ago. Great story line and on top of that, it is really well written. Please update soon =)
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: September 29, 2003 08:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an emotional chapter! Poor Bulma... I can imagine how she feels... how many times have we all let our stupid pride drive us instead of following our hearts? I can't wait 'til the next update...
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Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: September 27, 2003 01:58 EDT
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,^^ (I think I'm gonna cry too...I had better go get a hug) 'Intense'...I like the way her dazed state comes across...it's easy to get a sense of her disorientation...It's interesting how she sees her own hand in this development, yet she still emotionally seeks to blame Vegeta...pretty realistic. I like that she admits to herself exactly what she has been up to...and that she knows what matters most to her. {nice use of the title in the text...it really works ^_^...Everything up to this point has brought her to this realisation}...I look forward to finding out how they proceed from here.
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 04:38 EDT
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Excellent chapter. Poor Bulma is really suffering. Hindsight is 20/20 and now she sees how important her family is to her. Please hurry with the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is certainly a very complex woman, perhaps that's what attracted Vegeta to her... I must say that I was hoping to hear from Trunks perpective. However, I was not disappointed!!! I don't know how many ways I can say that your work is enlightening, enteraining, and gives pause for thoughts... I image it would be terrifying to be in Bulma's shoes...waiting and not knowing what's happened to her son and husband. Her thought's and emotions let me see a different side to Bulma. I'm glad she doesn't completely blame Vegeta, after all she knew when they got together that his past might come back and bite her in the ass... I gave her a "that's a girl" when she decided her family was more important then her *pride* and her business. Let's just hope she not to late to get back what she has lost!!! And Vegeta!!! Oh my!!! He's hurt worst than I thought...might end up with brain damage. This could open unforetold possiblities. I'm very anxious to see where you take it..*smiles* Waiting.................................................................... ........................................................................... .........................................................................
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Reviewed By: Princess Gail On: September 06, 2003 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great chapter. I'm glad Vegeta saved Bulma. Now he has to rescue Trunks. Can't wait for the next exciting chapter. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God I could finally ger onto MMO and read and review this thing! Great chapter, as usual! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 10:22 EDT
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OH crap! Vegeta got his butt kicked. Noooo! What's he going to do now?? And what will happen to Trunks?? |
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