| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 17:29 EDT
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I think Master Suh and Piccolo are my new favorite couple! *hearts* I do so like those two together. The bit in the space pod with that *other* couple was great too! LOL. Aren't I betaing this fic?
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Reviewed By: striderf--0 On: April 07, 2005 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!!!! dont take like a month for a chapter. this shit rocks!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 18:46 EDT
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GRRRRRRRRrrrrr. I just wrote you a lovely review and it didn't save because I typed the spam protection code wrong. Oh well, I basically said that I forget how much I love this fic until I read another update. This one was wonderful (until the evil cliffie >.
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Reviewed By: kat8125 On: April 04, 2005 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I just love the way you write Vegeta. Keep up the great fics :)
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Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! *falls onto knees* why are there no more chapters?!?!? *throws a tantrum*.........*sighs* err...brilliant story, so detailed its amazing!! your characters are complex, their backgrounds and personalities well looked into....keep posting i really want to know how this one will turn out.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 13:43 EST
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I loved it! Every minute of it! More brilliant Piccolo POV and that fabulous Vegeta scene. Top notch stuff! Bulma may know what Vegeta has planned but I sure don't. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, Ember. This fic just keeps getting more and more interesting.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 12, 2005 15:58 EST
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hey hey good chapter... wow that was intense what will happen now?
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Reviewed By: Pisq On: January 12, 2005 14:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I love Picollo's POV!
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Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is a very interesting story!! Nobody seems to write about Vegeta and Bulma after those 3 mysterious years! I love it!! It's very original and the fight scenes are awesome!! Merry christmas and please update soon! lol
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in) On: November 29, 2004 23:48 EST
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Oh man, the title of that chapter scared me! Pretty clever of Vegeta though; now nobody will be tailing those two, trying to kill them.
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Reviewed By: vegeta1 On: November 27, 2004 07:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: November 20, 2004 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o I have a BAD feeling about this... GREAT chappie.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 12:38 EST
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Wow! Now what? Short but oh, so excellent! I loved the way you find opportunities for excellent B/V without rearranging the story--it just happens so naturally. The piggy-back ride was a wonderful idea. Please don't make Bulma be too guilt-wracked over the whole thing. It's just her nature to be trusting. She wasn't raised to see intrigue around every corner. I'm really on pins and needles about Master Suh's true loyalties . . . . update soon!
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Title: Feeding Genius"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok we all know that it was bulmas fault move on...i want to know whats on vegeta BEAUTIFUL minds.....lol update..maria
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