| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:37 EST
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*sweatdrops under pressure to write great review to match great chapter* It's so great how you manage to make an adventure story here an exercise in B/V foreplay. The adrenaline was just killer here--first that teasing chapter title and then Vegeta protecting his woman and blowing things up while doing it. Damn, that's sexy! Anyway, this review sucked but this story just keeps getting better. I like your short chapters, btw--this one had a nice bite!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 15:17 EST
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nice chapter I would expect no less though... Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not singned in) On: November 18, 2004 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew...you had me scared for a minute there, with the title and all. Nice chapter...as always with it coming from you. Can't wait to read more. :)
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy On: November 18, 2004 07:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful epic i love the way you keep surprising us i mean who can you trust everyone seems to have a hidden agenda. I'm starting to get suspicious about the investors at Capsule corp if there is espionage and surveillance going on.I can't wait to find out vegetas master plan especially when everyone else finds out that Bulma and Vegeta are "Dead". VenusLegacy
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:57 EDT
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Oh, V's not too sappy---if he said stuff like that all the time, yeah, but in the heat of the moment, when it matters? Nah. It needed to be said. I love Master Suh and I was soooo relieved to find out she wasn't really double-crossing Vegeta. I want her to stick around when it's all over. She'd make a great addition to the Z-senshi! Plus, for some reason, I smell romance between her and Piccolo. Don't be squicked, please! I know Piccolo and ANYONE is usually wrong, but there's something about Master Suh. *shrugs* And thanks for the quick update!
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Title: Feeding Genius"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EMBER i really like this story.words just can't say how i feel about it...i do want them to put the issue behind them and look foward.he loves her and she loves him.so know they know who they can trust no one but each other so please update so we can read more...maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:02 EDT
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I loved Suh's POV!!!!! And the sexy jealous energy between B & V was trademark classic primo Ember! Vegeta was wonderfully IC--threatening then surprisingly fair. That's who he is. Enigmatic. Scarier when he is less confident than when he is confident. This Bulma you've written is his perfect match--they both have such deadly intelligence! This chapter was very enjoyable!
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Reviewed By: vegeta1 On: September 29, 2004 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so very glad you updated, I could pass on Master Suh's pov and rather focus on Bulma's or Vegeta's but none the less it was an excellent chapter
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Makota [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this fic. I'm glad you updated so quickly. I love the twists and spins you've put forth making it unique among the many B/V's out there, no mean feat. Bravo! I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!
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Title: ch27
Reviewed By: LS On: September 13, 2004 00:59 EDT
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What a battle!! *whew* I like the way you describe Vegeta's feelings as he gathers and uses the power for the Final Flash, the bliss of the power etc. I like the way Bulma is still always 'thinking', even while allowing for her emotions (when she finds him), and especially in such dire straits. I like how you show that he knows she is a compliment to his power, with her, he feels like he can do anything. I like how the 'team' aspect of their relationship keeps growing throughout this fic. Thanks for what you put into writing these chapters for us to enjoy ^_^, I look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Prince Vegeta1a On: September 12, 2004 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter has to be one of the best that I've read in a long time. And I really loved the fact that it was from Vegeta's pov. I hope that you will write more chapters from his pov again.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in!) On: September 12, 2004 14:17 EDT
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Hey, awesome chapter!! But I'm confused!!! What are they going to do?? Are they going to reprogram more robots, or is that just way out there? :D Can't wait for the next one though!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 11:39 EDT
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 11:39 EDT
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I just loved the fight scene, so well done. I truly visualized it as it was happening. And I loved how Bulma gets to be brilliant! *sigh* I just LOVE this story!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! That was a long wait, but in the end it was definitely worth it! The fight scene was fantastic, and I usually don't like fight scenes. My favorite parts are the interactions between Bulma and Vegeta, both verbal and unspoken. I really loved Vegeta's opinion of powering up and fighting as being addictive and almost as good as orgasm. LOL! And the chapter ended on a good note! I am eagerly looking forward to reading the next chapter... hopefully quicker than 3 months, and hopefully a B/V lemon. After all, Vegeta is (or at least WAS) horny from the fight. ;-) Hey, a girl can hope! Thank you again. You are one of my favorite authors. ~Gail~
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