| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sano On: January 04, 2003 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely hooked on this story. Only Bulma and Vegeta would be arguing as they get it on. Love those two. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!! I have been waiting 'so' long for this to come out. Please don't have us waiting for the next wonderful chapter as long as you had us waiting for this one. :) |
Reviewed By: Lil Pixie On: January 04, 2003 00:09 EST
Comment/Review:
that was supurb!!!! arguing during sex is great!! it's a style that not many authors use in stories, but this fit soooo perfectly!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 03, 2003 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Where's that ice bucket???
LOVED IT!!! |
Reviewed By: W5W5 On: March 31, 2003 15:13 EST
Comment/Review:
If she resorts to becoming basically a hooker then Vegeta should take Trunks go into space and never come back. |
Reviewed By: waterwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! Write more. I like Vegeta being nice. Great title and great fic. |
Reviewed By: valeyard On: November 29, 2002 18:59 EST
Comment/Review:
You got me hooked once again.
*blantant suggestion mode*
You need a drawing of how good Vegeta looks in that suit:-) Hee Hee
Looooove it! |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: November 29, 2002 16:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 14:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh...I'm hooked already! |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 08:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter....I love how he says her beauty's only out done by her brilliance....but I am blushing....that A/N at the end was so kind!
You know I'm a complete fan... totally. My bookmarks are flooded with your ff!
PLEASE continue! |
Reviewed By: none On: November 29, 2002 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay, this is really good and i cant wait till the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Kat On: November 28, 2002 21:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Girl you have got to continue this! This was an amazing start. I can't wait till the 'possesive vegeta' come's out. Please don't leave us hanging for long. |
Reviewed By: Goat On: March 13, 2003 15:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta is right. Also someone needs to die |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 28, 2002 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I think this fic is going great! please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Goat On: June 02, 2003 19:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Vegeta seem alittle to hostile towards Trunks. |
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