| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: September 09, 2004 21:28 EDT
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that was just a freaking awesome chapter
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot, that was great! Your fight scenes are only second to your lemons. "And then only just." LOL. There was such Vegeta vitality in this chapter and I enjoyed every sentence. In fact, I'm going to go back and read it again! The pleasing B/V exchange at the end was the least of it--it was all great!
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Reviewed By: Prince Vegeta1 On: July 28, 2004 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait till thew next chapter.....Luv the storie
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: razorknight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 08:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is frankly the first B/V story I read that does remind me of DBZ. Good to see people that can write lemons _and_ action as good as you. ... But I would like to see other POVs too. Mainly to figure out what Suh is thinking. Or if Yamcha is thinking at all (lol)
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Reviewed By: me On: June 30, 2004 00:52 EDT
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ha man, what a nice spin you've put on things. jesus is vegeta going to be pissed when he finds out!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ginia On: June 22, 2004 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So very nice to see another chapter! Hopefully you have kicked that writers block far down the road and will be able to share a few more chaps before it strikes again. Looking forward to more...
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Reviewed By: hinagiku On: June 18, 2004 09:50 EDT
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O:O I' curious... but I believe that she had not betrayed them. I'll see, I suppose...
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:40 EDT
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What a concept--writers block that lets you write high quality other work so when you come back to the original it's with simmering freshness! Probably only works for excruciatingly talented people like you! Master Suh--what did you doooo? I am going to have to go back and re-read parts of this now, after the long delay, you realize...hmmm, think I'll start with Sex on Boss' Desk and Therapy chapters :-) I actually remember those the best but what the hey, gotta start somewhere! This storyline drives me crazy (in a good way) because I'm in such a panic for Vegeta to get some peace. But man, I love how you write him--such a MAN! debbiechan
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:28 EDT
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well worth the wait! Now what? I do hope Master Suh isn't double-crossing Piccolo. That's a very bad idea indeed! This is such an original story, Lynn. I love it so! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: March 12, 2004 06:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when you write from Vegeta's POV. I get so lost in his head that I forget it's a story for a while. You have an amazing gift and I hate you for it!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *not logged in* On: March 11, 2004 13:30 EST
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IT DOES FUCKING POUR FOR MY BABY GODDAMN IT!!! ITS LIKE A STARWARS MOVIE GONE BAD! DAMN THOSE PIECES OF SHITY THAT HAVE COME TO CAUSE TROUBLE TO MY OUJI-SAMA! Ahem...Temper tamtrum over now Well dear KEEP THOSE CHAPPIES ON COMING! IM DYING HERE! I hope that The idiot FAypussy fuck is on earth and that Gohan gets hin but always leave some for veggie-poo LOL Later onna UPDATE K!>:\
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: March 11, 2004 10:44 EST
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Well, I was hoping you were going to make it easy on them. They've been through so much. *grins evilly* But I think I like it better your way! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: February 18, 2004 17:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I think it worked. It makes so much more sense now, knowing the real target. Woohoo! I wonder how Vegeta's ego will handle the thought that he is not the reason for this entire problem? Hmmmm. . . .
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Reviewed By: Jiggle- On: February 17, 2004 19:09 EST
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Yup you managed to pull it off. Another great chappy! Keep it up! :D
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 02, 2004 21:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Emotional and hot... all in one chapter. Way to go, girl!
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