| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Title: Had a feeling
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2012 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On chapter 9 and just had to review this is an amazing story! I've had a feeling for the past few chapters especially since she found the stuff on the hard drive that she would go into space but not alone!!! I thought somehow she would mask her ki hide in the ship and when it was too late come out and her and vegeta would have a space adventure! But this this is so not what I was expecting! Tables turned on vegeta he is the one left on earth this time, but I am sure it won't be for too long he'll go after her asap! |
Title: please finish story!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2010 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it has been a long time, but please finish this story!! I want to know what happens to my fav characters. I hope you find inspiration to finish this story along with your other unfinished works. I love your writing! You are truly talented.
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Title: another amazing story
Reviewed By: orphanedhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another awesome fanfic that you simply must finish. please? what happens to Trunks? do Vegeta and Bulma take over the universe and defeat Faylorn? what about Piccolo and Master Suh? oh and does Yamcha execute any plans he has to winning Bulma back? you have to answer your readers questions! cause this story shows too much insight into Bulma and Vegeta's relationship together, with Trunks, and how the universe works to be left unfinished. again at times i have a few issues with believability but your stories are still just too original and too enrapturing for me to find reason to complain. except about the extreme desire to read more ^.^
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful story, I am just so bummed that it has remained unfinished. I hope that you'll continue on with this fic. It is so original, so unlike any other fic I have read. And yet, it stays true to the canon. I feel like this could honestly be one of Toriyama's story-arcs. I will check back on it to see if it's been updated, though it has been three years since the last chapter, so you may have moved on from it. But, rest assured, you have at least one fan awaiting the continuation of this work!
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 07:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to update! I want to read more! I love this, even more than Everything Happens for a Reason
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 18:37 EDT
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It's such a good story. I read it a while a go (nearly 2 years, I suppose), and I still remembered that Ember did write good B/V storys. So I came here to read them again and it was certainly worth it. I love the description of the caracters, both so proud (and in caracter), and all there actions make sense. Well, I'm a little bit disappointed that you didn't finish any of the B/V fics that I loved so much. Thought I can understand that the need to write them diminishes, it's still a shame, they are so lovely.
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 13:15 EDT
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I love seeing Vegeta all subtle and scheming: the tactician in his element, it reminds me of when he was on Namek outwitting Frieza and throwing the Dragonballs out of the window. I like where your headed with this story and can't wait to see how Vegeta's master plan unravels, I always thought that Bulma and Vegeta have the potential to be an indestructable pair if they followed that route something I felt was unexplored at the end of the anime. Your description of the 'Grey area' evident in the characters of Vegeta and Master Suh, really showed the potential of them both, for you can see Vegeta's present state of mind almost as a prediction of the peace Master Suh can achieve if guided in the right direction.
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Title: Bwahahaha
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: August 28, 2005 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were a couple errors, but no big deal. It was great seeing an update...and lol, the ego/power-trip that Vegeta had about him and Bulma had me dying...him saying that they would be unstoppable was great. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: August 28, 2005 01:38 EDT
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yay for a new chapter great job... I loved it, those little moments between vegeta and bulma are great. That was priceless how he feeds off of her need for him... and how she's a strong character when she needs to be but when Vegeta is there for her she's glad to have him to comfort and protect her. I just loved it
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Reviewed By: majinryoko On: August 27, 2005 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awesome author! I love how each chapter is from a new POV. It gives insight into the story that a nuetral 3rd person view would. I love it! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 19:23 EDT
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oh this was such a fun chapter! I love the B/V dynamic, of course, and how you take the time and attention to give us these little details. "Sexy Caveman Style, I can live with that." LOL! I'm still smiling over that Bulma line. I just love her this fic, which is such an original story-- and thanks for reminding me that I love it whenever you update!
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged in On: August 19, 2005 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read this story in a while but seeing the updates tempted me again and i am glad i read them, the direction in which this story is heading just thrills me and i am eager to learn of Vegeta's plot to save trunks. I enjoy reading the story from Piccolo's point of view, your characterization of him is definately on point. I wonder what Master Suh has in store for him as well
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 23:31 EDT
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Great story. All the tension and animosity (as well as the make-ups!) between B&V has been done well. You have a way of making these characters come to life with such detail. I'm very interested in what Master Suh's master plan is and whose side she's really on, if anyone's at all. I have a feeling she's in it for herself -- but for what? Poor Piccolo! Though I was laughing at the idea of him being her little slave LOL! 'Til next time.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: April 16, 2005 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading all the chapters so far and i must say that this is an awesome fic. at first i thought this was gonna be about capsule corp, but then the plot suddenly changes. suddenly theyre in outerspace and all this shit happens. anywaiz i couldnt believe that vegeta would give up so easily with the fight against faylorn or whatever his name is. i mean i didnt think vegeta would be beaten that easily but then again i guess that had to happen so the story can go on. im also wondering what happened to the other Z fighters. i dont think theyre actually dead, are they? was master suh hitting on piccolo? lol i thought he was asexual. well yah i hope you update soon. and shit i hope vegeta and bulma finishes their business at GEyla?? so they can come home and vegeta can finally kick faylorn's ass!! and i just have to wonder what happened to capsule corp? is it back in business? are you gonna come back to that? update soon!!
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Reviewed By: stryderf0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 15:06 EDT
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LAST CHAPTER WAS GOOD KEEP EM COMING
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