| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2003 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great installment on your part :D. I must admit that I would love for Veggie to blow up that over bearing prick to pieces. Simmons is under the impression that Bulma will whore herself to him for his lousy money, but I think that in the end, and judging how pissed off Veggie was, he's gonna go to that happy bank in the sky. Oh yeah, Bulma's mom is one dumb shit to have said all those things in front of Simmons. I can't wait to see the fallout from all of this. Fantastic chap Ember!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: christabelebe On: February 08, 2003 11:39 EST
Comment/Review:
An other gem, people say that B/V has been over done but I disagree B/V in the right hands always sparkles and yours is a diamond. |
Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Veggie smashes that old man's face in ^-^
Normally I'm not so brutal towards the elderly, but that guy is asking for it.
Great fic!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 10:19 EST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, Vegeta's gonna go balistic!! can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: littlefrew On: February 05, 2003 15:44 EST
Comment/Review:
i really like this story but i'm curious to find out what vegeta did. so please update soon.
thankies |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 10, 2003 02:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, that's what I think!! Man, that was one industrial strenght lemon. Now I'm gonna have to have a cold one, and I ain't talkin about a beer either ^_~. Can't wait to see what Veggie does to ruin the evening and possibly CC. So I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat till you update. Excellent chap!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 10, 2003 02:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, you've got me hook, line and sinker. Excellent and original, looks like another stroke of genius on your part. Great job Ember!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover On: January 04, 2003 21:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Hurry up and keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Sano On: January 04, 2003 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely hooked on this story. Only Bulma and Vegeta would be arguing as they get it on. Love those two. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!! I have been waiting 'so' long for this to come out. Please don't have us waiting for the next wonderful chapter as long as you had us waiting for this one. :) |
Reviewed By: Lil Pixie On: January 04, 2003 00:09 EST
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that was supurb!!!! arguing during sex is great!! it's a style that not many authors use in stories, but this fit soooo perfectly!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 03, 2003 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Where's that ice bucket???
LOVED IT!!! |
Reviewed By: W5W5 On: March 31, 2003 15:13 EST
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If she resorts to becoming basically a hooker then Vegeta should take Trunks go into space and never come back. |
Reviewed By: waterwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! Write more. I like Vegeta being nice. Great title and great fic. |
Reviewed By: valeyard On: November 29, 2002 18:59 EST
Comment/Review:
You got me hooked once again.
*blantant suggestion mode*
You need a drawing of how good Vegeta looks in that suit:-) Hee Hee
Looooove it! |
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