| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 13, 2003 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to say this...but Vegeta has some really valid points....
Wake up Bulma....
*cough, cough*
Great chapter Ember! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:44 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was tense! Unfortunately, both had valid points, and I hate to say that things'll probably get worse before better. *sigh* Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 15:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: W5W5 On: March 13, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta should have mentioned how she whored herself out to that guy. |
Reviewed By: loulou On: March 13, 2003 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I hope to see more soon! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 11:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you asked me, the little shit (not Vegeta mind you) deserved much more than he recieved. But, then that would probably make the story a little less interesting. Your doing a great job so far, so keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 24, 2003 07:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh shit, I think Veggie's in big trouble. I can't say that I blame him for doing what he did, but he should've given Bulma a chance to speak her mind. Btw, I love the way you're writing this, from Bulma's pov ^_^. As always, you rock!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: April 03, 2003 08:33 EST
Comment/Review:
What is she going to do with the files Im dying here!!!!! Dont let him go BULMA!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
The muse thing ok I'll help u!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Goat On: February 19, 2003 19:41 EST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta should have killed him. |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: February 19, 2003 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That rocked... i understand how frustrated Bulma must be, but still... I don't blame Vegeta at all.. i would have been mad if my husband let the slide.. but he should have taken it outside. oh oh! or at the hotel!! MHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story keep up the good work . Loved it |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 12:50 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! I kind of feel sorry for Vegeta, even though Bulma is rightfully angry. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Onna On: February 19, 2003 11:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe, sounds typical for Vegeta...rage-driven...territorial...*yum* |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 19, 2003 11:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad you put chapter 4 out today! Can't wait to see more. Great writing Ember |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect as always! I love your work more and more as time passes. You have an amazing gift! |
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