| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover#? On: May 18, 2004 14:02 CDT
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OK, what happened to you guys??? Don't you know that you have tons of adoring fans sitting on edge waiting for you to write more of this story? You can't just leave us hanging! I'M GOING THROUGH WITHDRAW HERE, FOR HEAVENS SAKE!!! Please, please, please, pleeeeease write more soon!!! We need you guys! *looks around at other reviewers* Right? Okay, then! It's unanomous... WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover#? On: April 13, 2004 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW................................................................ummmmmm, more please!!! (I love your details, and originality, and creativity, and, and, and...well, write quickly!!! I know you haven't updated for several months, but don't give up -- we love you guys and I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!)
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 08:30 CST
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hey what happened to you two? did the yaoi-con suck you down and you're lost in a void of bishonen-goodness unable to get back to us and update us on this scruptios ficcy?? Please, PLEASE post soon! I miss you two and want the rest of this fic! Chibi Hoshi*
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Reviewed By: hitchhiker On: February 16, 2004 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. This is an absolutely amazing fic, where the hell did you get such brilliantly hentai ideas? But you have deprived your yaoi-loving audience for far too long! PLEASE update! If what's coming up is anything like the video files *licks lips*....i can't wait... but please update soon, this fic is way too good to be abandonned! and i'd hate to have to use my still-in-it's-shop-wrapping electric sporker on you guys!
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! I want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Moosie On: January 07, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAA!!!!!!!!! hahahahahaha at last an author who can rival my own sadistic tendencies. some of those scenes were just plain wrong. were do you get this stuff??? it's amazing!!! this is, by far, one of the best fics i have ever read. this is coming from someone who spends waaaaaaaay too much time reading on the net.0_0 but you my dear Dark Serapha, are a talented and gifted author. SO SIT YOUR ASS DOWN AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER please?
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Reviewed By: Maylar On: November 29, 2003 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story UpDate Soon!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, amazing, fantastic!! I can't wait to read more, especially about how the Present (sans Goku) timeline is going. The way you are presenting point of view is really great, and you are both doing wonderful jobs with charaterization. I would also like to add that the art that you've done for this story really wonderful. I'm eagerly awaiting the next update (which will hopefully be very soon!).
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Reviewed By: Glorificus On: October 09, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is among the best I have ever read. Your style of writing is excellent. I also like the use of Jeice in the story. It is so hard to find good yaoi with Jeice in it!
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Reviewed By: Gryphon Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd've given you a twelve or thirteen on the enjoyment factor, but MM.org doesn't allow that sort of thing. *smirks* By all means, do continue! Swiftly, with lots of romance on the GokuxVegeta front! Sometimes the many POV switches can get confusing, but you make it lots of fun to read what different people are thinking about each other! Are you gonna' make Goku spill the beans about the future? Or show his SSJ form? *sigh* It would be awesome if you would, but talk about screwing up the timeline! Sheesh! Maybe . . . *smiles slyly* Maybe you could make Goku do all that oh-so-cool stuff that I mentioned above and make the resulting timeline merely branch off from the original one. That might be kinda' cool . . . Hmm. But what would happen to Mirai Vegeta . . . It's too confusing for me. You've got it covered. Keep up the good work! Ja! ~Gryphon Gal~
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Reviewed By: vegetaslillady On: August 20, 2003 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was amazing!!! please please update!!!!i want to know what happens! if u are please E-mail me at ZweetAZrevenge@aol.com.............PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: August 17, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I luv this story! Its great, it has evry thing in it that makes an excellent story! I cant wait to read what happens next. write again soon |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter (11)! Poor Goku! He`s tortmented through the whole chapter, though you can say he seems to like some of it very much! ^_^ I`ve waited so long for some action between Goku and Vegeta!! |
Reviewed By: Jada Flame On: July 05, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading the different POVs. Only about halfway through it (as of now), but still doggedly reading. The dialogue thingies at the ends of the chapters are very amusing as well.
Yes, yes, I want the hidden link(s?)!!
jade.empress@wildmail.com
Hurry hurry please! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: FaNaTiC On: June 11, 2003 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! This has got to be one of my most, most, favorite fics on the net. You got me hooked on Zarbon x Jeice pairings. You're also a great writer! KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK!!!!! |
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