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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I told you in the email I sent you I do enjoy this fic and I agree, it's a shame if you don't finish it, but then again I've abandoned most of my older stories too so I have not room to talk. Anyways it made me happy to read to 22, and I hope you continue it, or at the very best continue writing, I love your writing style and I'll be sure to check out your other fics. Best wishes and I hope I get to read more one day. =)
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, its a shame you never continued with it...
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Title: Nifty!
Reviewed By: Prophet WolfStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHH! More please! XD I
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Reviewed By: ITesa On: May 29, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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A) It is only "right and proper" for a young couple to go to bed together when they are married. The rest of the world may say it's "OK" for them to go to bed before they're married but that is worlds different from "right and proper." B) The word you want is "chaste." It's "a chaste kiss," not "a chastised kiss." I really enjoy this story and the different angles you use to show us the characters. This chapter makes me uncomfortable though. There are kids on the net and many of them read fanfic. Nobody should tell them that it's "right and proper" for them to sleep together. They haven't yet developed the emotional maturity or the responsibility to deal with sex and its many repurcussions.
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 22:23 CDT
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I've been away for a while and finally got to catch up on the last few chapters of my favorite story. You just keep on surprising me! I love the twist with the Kais having planned all of this out for their benefit. So devious to think of the gods manipulating us to their advantage!! OMG Shuma as a woman ---- too evil!! I love it! And that last line in the last chapter is just too memorable. "He would have his victory, he would have his fuck, and then he would have his revenge. Not bad for a plan B." Just a PERFECT Vegeta quote. Looking forward to next chapter but no worries. We all understand fiction comes next to real life :)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, real life comes before fake life. It was a great chapter even if it was short. Take your time if you need it, but I'll be waiting for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 20:01 CDT
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Ah! I figured it out. Every time I type the "less than" character in the little mad face emoticon, my review gets lopped off! Anyway, now I can properly review: Your writing lately has been making me think about the characters--and here I thought I'd exhausted thinking about them! I'd written my own Dr. Briefs tiny back story just days ago and now I'm giving it more dimension after reading this short chapter! I can't believe that I haven't missed Vegeta in this story--truly a mark of a well told tale because I'm a Vegetaholic--but your ending was so full of promise and I'm sure when he shows up, there will be the STORM after the CALM and I'll just be all "ooooooooh" :-) Sorry real life is a bitch--when things are sucky, your stories and art make me happier. Dream of Vegeta and no rush with the next chappie--I'm getting milage out of everything you write!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 14:23 CDT
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it did it AGAIN! Why does mm.org crop my reviews short for you and you alone???????? I was going to say that I appreciate all the generosity you give to characterization in your fics... lemme see if this goes through and then I may write more. >.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 14:21 CDT
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loooooooooved the glimpse into Papa Briefs personal life. Afraid to leave longer review because I just saw that my last one for "Feeding Genius" got cropped short >.
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Title: Keep Writing!
Reviewed By: katrina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was very good. I cant wait for Vegeta to get back to Earth and realize he loves Bulma! I understand if you dont get a chance to write for a while, but I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: stryderf0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 10:51 CDT
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come on woman update its been like three month's. anyway the storie is tight.
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They should have an addiction rating up there. =) I read this originally on adimra's site and was disappointed at the long periods of time between updates. Thank you so much for directing me here! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and portrayal of the characters. *LOL* Especially poor Shuma. I can tell that part is going to be extremely interesting! Keep up the amazing work and please update this as soon as you can!
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Title: Everything Happens For A Reason
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes but it was worth the wait..so now i think i understand the plan..but to take vegeta out now do you think it was to soon..yamcha is very sneaky but i think that Shuma is going to do just find...update soon..great chapter...maria
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:09 CST
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Woo hoo - another wonderful chapter, Lynn! I just love your writing style - it was so easy to envision the Kai's having their little meeting and discussing the consequenses of their meddling. Hmmm. I swear it almost sounded as if they were using the Zero System... ;) So. What does your devious little mind have planned for Shuma, huh? You so don't want to know what ideas I've come up with! ;)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a great chapter. I love the way you brought the Kais into the mix. This is a very fresh approach to the story and I think it;s absolutely wonderful that you thought of it. I can't wait for your next chapter. Please hurry!!!!
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