| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 23:10 EDT
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BUT THATS JUST 4 THE FIRST 2 CHAPTERS.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COULD U PUT THEM INTO PARAGRAPHS? its hard to read when everthings together. and wat font r u using? its hard to see. not a flame. but i just cant read without my glasses on. and that doesnt happen unless its really small. update soon. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: March 21, 2008 06:50 EDT
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Just how dumb is Kagome? Who in their right mind would name their cat son 'Inuyasha? Ah, well... ^___^ Oh, it was so funny. I finished the chapter and immediately said "That sneaky, little bug!" Sessh is going to have an interesting reaction to that one!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 16:20 EDT
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One word: MORE. I can't wait for the next chapter. I was laughing when Sesshy was in dog obedience school. Please update soon!! =]
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Title: yay! ^_^
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 04:48 EDT
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It's been quite a while! This was a great chapter, I'm glad you haven't abandoned it. Shippou is quite the handful! And Inuyasha was finally revealed - I was wondering when you would do that. But... why did Inuyasha tell Kagome that Sesshoumaru was human? I mean, I guess he kinda is, when he turns human. But... he's gotta see that something is happening to the spell. Man, I'm so excited, and I hope you're able to get the next chapter out a little quicker this time. XD But I know how it is... Til next time!
ÄÁQ
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Title: Love the story.
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I am in love with this story. I have only seen a few of the esipodes(sp?). And they have not been any time recently, but I believe you have them down pat. I really love Shippou being what he is, a kistune. I also believe that Inuyasha will have to face an enraged Sesshomaru after learning that he 'Sesshomaru' is fully human. Hehe. But please continue on with the story, I can not wait to see what happens next. ~bwlj
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GASP* You're back! ^o^ *gives you a cookie* So glad you've updated!! And a funny chapter a that. *rambles* Well, it looks like Shippo's adjusting pretty well to living with Kagome (such a grown up sounding room for someone who's supposed to be a little boy). ...Though I'm sure having Inuyasha there helps a lot. What's the deal with the two of them anyway? Was Shippo that young when he met Inuyasha? And I'd think that Inuyasha telling Kagome up front that he knows who Shippo is (because he knew his father?), would be much better than hiding it. Especially since he knows how Kagome can be with the whole secret thing. Speaking of secrets... Funny ending to this chapter. I'm sure Sesshomaru'll just love it if/when Kagome brings up that she found out Inuyasha's a hanyou and how it' a shame he doesn't have the ears. LOL So~ yeah. Great chapter (as usual). I'm looking forward to the next one. Hopefully Silver's blue imagination will be relieved in the next chapter, yes? ^^ Ohoho!
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Reviewed By: felipa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 03:31 EDT
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Thank you ohhhhh Thank you for updating. Im so happy to see that u wont put this wonderfull story on hold. I cant wait to see what wIll happen next time. PLEASE dont take too long again. THANK YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 00:41 EST
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OOOOOOHHHHH!!!!! Inuyasha just majorly lied to her! She is going to be sooo mad when she finds out! Will Inuyasha ever get a subjugation necklace? It would be funny! But then again i do like how this story differs from the anime/manga... hmm... Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: March 07, 2008 07:21 EST
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YOU UPDATED! YOU REALLY UPDATED! YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A NEW CHAPTER! UPDATE!!!!!!! It's a little weird having chapter 36 and then having 35 repeat, but I'm really happy to see a new chapter!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224(not logged in) On: March 06, 2008 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how this story is going. Keep up the wonderful writing.
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: allyct160 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the new story a lot, but could you have not put the last chapter and also the new one together it was a little annoying seeing so much of a chapter gone to waste. i like how inuyasha ended up saying "Full human" instead of telling her the truth - it's going to be a while until Kagome finds out that Chance is Sesshoumaru and it will damn be an interesting turn of events. can't wait for his spell to break but it'll be goodbye to Chance - though good name for a dog.
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 21:16 EST
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Hey! Great to see an update from you again! Loved the chapter, but what's up with chapter 35 repeated, what was it, once or twice? below this chapter? One was in bold. Anyway, I liked the ending, but so frustrating! Grrr! I hope to read more soon! Take care :)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 20:18 EST
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yahoo! an update. lol. i liked it. i'm sure sess is going to be pretty upset once he finds out what inu said. lol. lookin forward to the next chapter. FL
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Title: update?
Reviewed By: gradualwisd0m [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:( Please don't tell me you've given up on this story! Of all the fics I've been reading this one has me most anxious to see what happens!
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