| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 17:09 EST
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This is absolutely amazing. I never thought that I would like an InuYasha fanfic that has nothing to do with the normal going-down-the-well-to-the-feudal-era thing, you know? But this is really good. It's been forever since you updated, so... please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is amazing. I put off doing homework just to get to this chapter. I get here and I go to click the next chapter, and there is not one. I will be waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: -.-
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really love this fic! I started reading it on FF, but when I found out that (like me) you don't put lemons in that site, I came over here to read. This is a great, original, smooth story, and I adore AU's. You have so much freedom with them! What's funny is that I TOTALLY guessed that Naraku was spying, although I was thinking he was just peeping in her window. But I so knew something was up. And I guessed that Kagome was going to adopt Shippou even before his guardian got sick. AU's are so fun, and I'm glad you came up with this slow-moving romance line. Great job, and I look forward to your next (overdue!) update, LOL.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really awesome story and I hope you put up mare chapters soon! I just can't wait to see how things turn out from where you left off.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Kate the InuYoukai01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 14:41 EST
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I know I've reviewed before, but I would like to review again and express my total love for this fanfiction. I would really like you to update soon so that I may see the developments Kagome has to undergo with a child and how Sesshomaru feels about all of this! It is a really gripping story. It has always been really difficult to put the story aside and read something else. I am indeed quite envious! You write so well, and all of your stories are so compelling. I'm a big fan of your fanart as well. Your talent will get you somewhere, I'm certain. Please, UPDATE SOON! You left off at a very interesting point. Your Humble Fan! Kate the InuYoukai01
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Reviewed By: NewYorkCityUtopia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 04:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I hope newchapters will keep coming...very fast! (still, I wish some missing words and typos were taken care of; sorry for suggesting this when I'm not even a native speaker of English, but spelling matters in any language)
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Reviewed By: beccansnc [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 13:45 EDT
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Oh this story is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:05 EDT
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Such a good chapter. Poor Shippo losing his grandma like that. Its just so sad! Oh well atleast he gets to stay with Kagome! Yea! Anyway really good chapter!!! Keep up the good work! Also please update soon! I am desperate to read the rest!!!!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 15:53 EDT
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This was a great chapter! Kagome went to Sesshoumaru's apartment which was funny when he finally arrived, cause I kept wondering why Chance didn't go with her. It was sad that the guardian died. She was really nice. I want Kagome to say something really offensive to The old coot who keeps being meen to her, enough that he won't be able to speak. I wonder what Kagome's case kids will think? And how will Shippo and Sesshoumaru react to each other? Will shippo try to blame some of his mischeviousness on him? That would be hilarious! this was a fantastic chapter like always! Please update again soon!
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Title: *snickers*
Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love how she handles that snot nosed cretin of a Tai. I can't wait to see hwo that particular Tai "Tries" to handle her, especially when they meet and Sesshoumaru/Chance is around. *evil grin* you have the perfect set up for InuYasha doing the "I told you so" dance and for Sesshoumaru to get reeeeealy pissed off. LOL. Keep up the wonderful work. DD
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good chapter. I like how Sesshoumaru have changed. I don't know what else to say, but I can't wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: bluefire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good story so far :)
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Title: Tell me what you are thinking :P
Reviewed By: uni_youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 19:24 EDT
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I am quite curious to find out about the bite that sesshy did to her neck *wink* And how is he going to explain the fact to kagome that him and chance are one in the same. She damn near gave up her life to find chance in a burning building. Plus she ain't a virgin no more. Great story and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 17:47 EDT
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Oooo great chapter....I love Kagome's family...they are so funny! When does Sessy come back? I mean as his human form?
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 13:24 EDT
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This is all coming along so well! I wonder if Chance will be given a medal for what he did? I think that he deserves one! Chance seems to be in the habit of saving people. This is a really fantastic chapter and story! I love it soo much! Please update again soon!
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