| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 23:01 EDT
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the begining month of june as in next year? well this is an amazing stroy i like it alot and as much as i wish that you would update sooner then that i know that everyone on this earth has somesort of a life! lol. this really is an amazing story keep up the great work! you are an amazing writer.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 23:57 EDT
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oh my god i love this story!!!! please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. you are an amazing writer keep up the great work.
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Title: Very Well Done
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must applaud you on your story. I started reading it at 6pm and it is now 11pm. There aren't many stories that hold my attention to the point where I read this many chapters. Once I started I couldn't stop. I am glad you haven't rushed this story. Too many times people rush into the sexual content of it. I love the way you have written all the characters into the story, and how you have Kikyo pestering Sesshoumaru all the time. I am glad those two finally done it. It took them long enough Another thing I love about this story is how you have been able to write a relationship between Sesshoumaru and InuYasha without it being too sappy. I have added this to my favorites and hope to get an undate soon. As I said, this story is the best one I have read so far for Kagome/Sesshoumaru. You have a great talent for writing many relationships into the story. Perfect score.
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: August 12, 2007 07:46 EDT
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Too Short too short too short! (I'm not complaining so much about the length of the chapter, I just want more of the story. :P)
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 12:45 EDT
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AW! Poor Shippo! He is figuring out that his Grandma is dying. Will she pick Kagome as the one to take care of Shippo? She already knows that he's a demon! This was a good chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 23:02 EDT
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Yay! Kags finally lost her virginity! Woo hoo! But leaving me hanging with the "I think I might love you"... too cruel... but well worth the wait... anywhoodle... seeing what's up w/shippo now, eh? i'm just tingling with anticipation...
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 18:30 EDT
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Really good chapter.....Did he hear her say that she loved him?
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Reviewed By: kerph [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 00:40 EDT
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good job it's been along time since i read a lemon like this and so far you story is pretty good can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Its Who I Am [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 00:27 EDT
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Did Sess mark her as his mate?? This is soooo funny how Inuyasha set them up. I doubt that he planned for it to go sooooooo damn welll!!! Lol ^__^ Its going to really be something if they are mated to eachother and that Kagome still doesn't know that Sess is also Chance!!! Wonder what she'll do when she find out!! She'll prob think that she had sex with her DOG!!! LMAO!!!! Keep up the good work I just LOVE this story. ^__^
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Title: nice job
Reviewed By: allyct160 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the next chapter, can't wait for more to come, and when sesshoumaru gets out of the spell that was placed over him!! Keep up the great job!!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter, was wondering when that was gonna happen and was disappointed. :D Bravo! ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 16:59 EDT
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Aaaaargh! What a cliffie! *faints* X_X Don't leave us hanging like that! Hurry up and update! And update the next chapter after that too. ;) I really want to know what happens after those words. :D
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 12:41 EDT
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So good! So good! So good! SO GOOD!!! I totally loved it! Made me squeal in happiness and excitement. I laughed too. I absolutely love this story! Please updaate again soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 12:09 EDT
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Chapter Thirty-Two [Fallen]: Oooh, brilliant chapter! I love the little Sesshomarou-is-afraid-of-dogs part, and Inuyasha was just so adorable saying that! I can't wait to read the rest, though I'm rather shocked that Kagome gave in to Sesshomarou that quickly... Anyways, thanks for the link to A Single Spark - I've been trying to find that site for forever!
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Reviewed By: tshapo_chi On: July 24, 2007 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very impressed. I have very much enjoyed this story. I don't find many that are written in modern day that I enjoy, so this one is a rare find for me. I'm glad to hear that Shippo is coming back in the next chapter, though I am sad for no kag and sessho. Please keep up the good work.
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