| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: ame-chan not logged in On: October 29, 2004 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!!! thank you, and I hope the next chapter comes soon!!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune (i'm too lazy to login) On: October 29, 2004 17:21 EDT
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You know what? You are evil. That was a good chappie, though. You need to update really soon. I'm so bored, and noyhing is happening with any of the other fanfics on my favorites list. Update soon!!! Please?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Title: a surprise for hiei and kagome
Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter very much. I would like to offer a suggestion for a chapter, are kagome and sango still experiencing their periods, if so can hiei and kagome become parents because of what happened in this chapter? If not can kagome experience a change due to her mating with Hiei? please update really soon, because you story is one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: outlawsiren On: October 29, 2004 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But now How is Hiei going to find out about the promise to lord fluffy? that is going to be very interesting. please keep going!!!!!
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Title: The psycho authoress who loves good stories
Reviewed By: Irish Maiden On: October 29, 2004 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a brilliant authoress! Pure genius! I love this story, and I can't wait for the update. Hail the queen, people. I guess the reason why I like this so much is because it's not fruity - got a nice balance between light and dark going. Anyways...I'll be waiting for your update...are you going to give Kurama a break? Poor guy was hoping for some nookie, but Hiei beat him to it...although Hiei needed it more. Ja ne!
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Title: YAAAY!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Pleased_Hanyou On: October 29, 2004 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheheheh, Kagome's gonna feel that in the morning! *cheesy grin* Sorry I haven't reviewed in like forever but, *thumps mm.org* It wouldn't let me see your new chapters. Anyhoo, great lemon *is jealous of the almighty Lemon Queen* hella better than I could do. Update again! Yoake (P.S. My sis and I love your site's headline; "My killer robot skull-fucked your honor student", we giggle like mad each time we see it.)
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 10:34 EDT
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that was GREAT!!! oh man I hope it is heie/kag that would be great:D
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O ahhhhhhhh.... >_< noooooooo......o_oahhhhhhhh.....;;;deep breath;;; .....ahhhhhhh....... Ok, no that i have calm down. This was a really Really good chapter. you are now my fav writer and i worship the ground you walk on... but only if you get the next chapter up soon so i can see if hiei finds out and how he reacts... must know, need to find out, can't wait... ;;;twitch twitch;;; ~_< Yeah, so if you can't tell i really like the story. Good plot twists and great over all story line. Keep up the good work and please update soon... like, oh... you know... if it isn't to much of a problem.... TONIGHT... j/k hehe anyways, great job... ^_~
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 03:48 EDT
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I had to write another review; I just had to. I went through and re-read the chapters, simply because I adore them. Because of this story, I have read through some Yu Yu Hakusho (the few volumes that are translated, I should say) and I now love the manga series. This story in particular is one of my definate favorites; it's so much fun to read. You do a great job. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great work! ^^;
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Reviewed By: intheshadows229 On: October 25, 2004 22:28 EDT
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but...but what happned to Rin? and why did you make kagome sesshomarus pet? i mean a PET come on people. o who cares, update soon JA NE!
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 24, 2004 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! another update, wheee!! and i got a shout-out, allllriiigghht!!! great chapter, although i hope there'll be a way outta that deal w/Sesshie somehow, but whatever u do with it will no doubt be entertaining.... anyway... yeah, good, great... until next time... (hope u update again soon, but i know all too well how life seems to pop out at people all the time... pesky reality)
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Reviewed By: digger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing that I believe that you could do better is give some description on the terrain that they are in. Other than that you really are quite good. Almost good enough to write professionally if you are so inclined. By the way what would you think about crossing over Inuyasha with the book "When the Devil Dances" by John Ringo. Imagine if some one from even colder than Sesshomaru was to meet the gang.
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Title: none
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 23:05 EDT
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narakus gonna try and do to kag and heie what he did to inu and kik aint he? ooo i just know he is. anywho great chappy and up-date soon pls
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Reviewed By: Luna699 On: October 23, 2004 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story completely. Can't wait to see Hiei's reaction when or if he finds out about the deal. I love this story to bits and pieces. I'm keeping up with the Red sox game thats on right now. I hope the Red Sox win. For naruto stuff go to www.narutofan.com it has everything. the OSTs for the series, Manga all chapters. and bittorrents. (Though I would only download ANBU best quality). the only thing is you have to make an acc to DL the Mnaga and Music and all. luina
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 18:52 EDT
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Wow that was so good!!! ^^ I hope you'll update sooner... sheesh I was so scared when Naraku killed Hiei... O.O I'm happy he still alive! ^^ *goes change the litter for the cat, goes eat, goes making the dishes and comes back one hour later* okay I'm continuing now. hmm... oh, no many things left to write. Update soon!!!!!! ^^ Please! ^^'
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