| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anon367 On: January 27, 2006 18:08 EST
Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 17:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLESE finish this story, I've just got to know what happens. Kagome isn't goning to be Sesshoumarus pet is she? It's got to have a happy ending, right? This story is so well written it would be such ashame if it were unfinished.
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Title: Paradox!
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 12:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv hiei/kagome pairing, so this better be it! please post your next chapters as soon as possible! or else! lolz! I want Hiei.kagome lemons ... i noe ... i'm a major hentai of hiei/kagome, lolz!
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Reviewed By: Tilin On: October 02, 2005 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! You are far by one of the greatest fanfic writers there is...a goddess I tell you! I am a slave to your greatness. ..and I'm also your 200th reviewer. :)
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Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled upon this story and absolutly LOVE it! Im a fan of Kagome and Kurama as well as InuYasha but this is a new twist that I absloutly adore! The story is very well written and I find that I loose myself in the sceens; they come alive like a movie in my head. Thats what I look for in a perfect story. You have that. Im looking forward to seeing how this will end.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 05:52 EDT
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THIS IS THE FREAKING GREATEST KAG/HIEI CROSSOVER OF ALL FEAKING TIME!!!! I love this to a million freaking pieces and reread this all the time (takes me about 3 days because I keep drifting off imanging the scene in my head). I wonder now that Kagome had sex with Hiei does this mean they are mated or is more needed to do that. In the begining he says he'll never mate a human but what does he need in order for that to happen. I also noticed that neither he or anyone else has told her that he has another form. I don't know what you call his green-eyed form but she doesn't know he can transform yet. I love this please update soon!!!!! *leaves offering of Bailey's Irish Cream at the altar of updated fanfics*
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 17:32 EDT
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I'm glad to see you going back and revising this. It reads a lot better than the first time I read it for the BAFC. It feels a lot smoother now and more fleshed out, even if you did some scene editing. The action is very well done and the blending of the two worlds is going very well, In fact I think the tension is what you do best. While you have me getting attached to what happens between Kagome and Hiei, it is the pacing and the other plots that have me clicking the next chapter button. I look forward to your putting out the next part. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: silver1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so please update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Alesyira (not signed in) On: July 14, 2005 06:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it rather frustrating that this fic is so fascinating that I forgot to go to sleep. :P I look forward to seeing updates! :D
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Reviewed By: VB On: June 23, 2005 07:06 EDT
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Aww you suck you took out the good part. I loved the part where Kagome protected Shippou. *pout* it's just not fair.
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Reviewed By: faerygirl44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 09:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!!!!
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Title: paradox
Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i love it and i am glad you are going to finsh it come hell or high water. please post chapter soon i dislike cliffs you know i just might lose sleep lol
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Title: Haircolour
Reviewed By: Okibi On: May 23, 2005 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Er... just thought you might like to know... >>"That," she said, pointing at the _redhead_ just now getting up from the floor, "is my instructor! Sit!" Inuyasha had been trying to stand when she activated the spell again, reacquainting him with the hardwood floor. I love your work! Sorry for the repost!!
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