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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 23, 2004 14:20 EDT
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Botan should look out then... Kagome's deadly when she's on a rampage....
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Reviewed By: Outlaw siren On: October 23, 2004 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!! Going to Update soon? I hope so. I need to know how everyone is going to react to what Kagome did. That will be interesting.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it but but but.. *at a loss for words* did you have to leave it at such a cliffie? *pout* Please update soon! I can't wait to see Koenma and possibly even Hiei's reaction to Kagome's news when and if the find out. Poor 'Gome. *big sigh* Good luck till next time (which hopefully isn't too far away). Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: -Amy- On: October 23, 2004 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man oh man is this story just getting better and better. I am really not like Fluffy right now, and I he is one of my fav guys. Just when things just get going good with Hiei and Kagome that has to happen. But then again that is what usually happens when things are good. Well I can't wait for your next chapter, your always putting us in suspence so we come back and it works. So Plesesssssssssssssssss update really really soon, I can't wait for find out what will happen next with the whole gang and all. Your Oh So Loly FAn -Amy-
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:49 EDT
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*squeal* So good! Excellent update. I loved Inuyasha's little outburst about Kagome lifting her skirt. Cracked me up and made my blood boil all at the same time. - Damn you, Sess! It figures he'd do something like that: a life for a life. Damn mutt. Kagome and Hiei will simply have to figure something out... Sesshoumaru's pet miko, indeed. I look forward to the next update. Until then, great work! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:42 EDT
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please updat soon, i can't wait to see what your going to do with kagome's and sesshomaru's deal. And poor hiei! whats he gonna do when he finds out, try to kill sesshy no dout. Will he know he died when he wakes? will he notice something wrong with the way kagome is acting? please UPDATE SOON! Sooner than 4 weeks this time maybe?
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: October 21, 2004 19:47 EDT
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This is a great fic! I love the pairing Kag/Hiei! Hope you update soon!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I skipped an entier night of working on my report to read this because it was so good... i just couldn't stop myself. Oh well, there's always study hall. Anyways this is such a good story i won't even try to put it into words how much i like it. I think it might make my head explode to have to think that hard at 1 in the a.m. But please update really soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 17, 2004 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great update!! can't wait for the next one!!! yours is the best hiei/kag fic i've come across!! and i agree on your opinion of the mating "ritual" being relevant to only certain "species" .... particularly since he's an elemental apparition, it just doesn't seem to fit..... no qualms on any animal youkai having a ritual, though
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Reviewed By: Silver WolfStar On: October 17, 2004 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The stroy thus far is very interesting and impressive. I am please to say that you are the very first author on this webpage to actually use proper grammer and spelling componants. The story line is very intruging and I am proud to say that you are by far my favorit author for supplying me with both an escellent story and proper mechanics. I am very please, please do keep up the extrodinairy work, and update as soon as posible since I can not wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh this is really a great fic! This is the first one that I have read that was more of a Hiei and Kagome, but then again I have only read a couple of crossovers for theses animes so I guess I'll just have to read more (yours included I hope). Till next time, which I hope isn't too long, ja ne! ^.~
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Reviewed By: rain~chan(not logged in) On: October 11, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a very mean cliffhanger!! do Hiei and Kagome talk about and maybe show what they mean to each other in the next chapter? and when do we find out why the jagan is reacting to Kagome the way it is?.. no matter the answers, this story is awesome!! Thank you so much for writing it!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: tinak142 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like u story please update soon i also like ur website
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 10, 2004 21:08 EDT
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grrrr... what IS he planning!!!!!!
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Title: Really GOOD!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaslave [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 15:02 EDT
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i love it i cant wait for more please keep up the good work i havent read a hiei/kagome fanfic before i thought it would be dumb it was really good!! great job please update soon!!
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