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Reviewed By: evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the hell why are you a red sox fan the yannkees rule!!!!!!!!!!i cant belive you like them and so what if we didnt go to the world series!we have way more world series than you so in your face!lol i really like your fic it is good.update super fast please!!!!!!
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Title: Very entertaining!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stayed up *way* too late last night reading the story-thus-far! I've only recently started watching YYH (I just finished the episode arc where Yukina was introduced), but I'm really enjoying your characterizations. You've got some wonderful jeopardies--Naraku's mind games with Souta are truly creepy--and also a plausible reason for the two sets of characters to intersect. And I love the humor. The only thing that struck sort of a wrong note was Kagome's urging Hiei to draw out his killing of the three youkai scavengers. In the series canon, Kagome is a girl of almost infinite compassion and empathy--I can accept her becoming a kick-ass taijya, but the element of sadistic glee she took in watching Hiei kill seemed quite out of character for her. In any case, you're doing a great job with this story, and I look forward to future chapters!
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Reviewed By: lilostgirl On: November 10, 2004 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you so much for updating. the lemon was great and i hope that you update soon or i will be board to death. your one of the only writers who hasent quit with the story i liked. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: usher'swife On: November 07, 2004 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please make this a kurama kagome fic! please please please please!
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 18:21 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 02, 2004 19:33 EST
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....too good, can't comment.
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 02, 2004 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! another update!! and the end of FRUSTRATION for kags and hiei.... damn! now he'll be even more pissed when he finds out about her deal with sess... can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ~Kit~ ^..^
Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 00:54 EST
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I love this story!! Youre doing a really awesome job. Oh, and I was just reading sumthing that caught my eye, & it hit me why Sango got 'coral' pink shoes lol Sango translates into coral. Very brilliant of you. Im pleased. :D
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 23:28 EST
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Doing great so far! The whole "I promise my life to Sess" thing is too much. Should I even ask how you plan to get Kag out of this one? I know, I know, "Wait and see. Muwahahahaha!" Just don't make us wait too long, ok?
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Title: 16
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so BLOODY AWESOME...HOnestly where do you comeup w/this stufff I mean that was just great...really really great...I mean WOW!!! I love Heie and I love how you portray him in your story and everything...just WOW!!!
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Title: 15
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT??? HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!?!?!? I mean that' just EVIL EVIL I SAY...but something has got to happen to fix that Right??? RIGHT??? I hope so cause man oh mna that would just all sorts of suck
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Title: 14
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:54 EST
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Man I HATE Naraku...but man mental warfare...always fun to watch but not to participate in...
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Title: chpt 13
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:53 EST
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OH man oh man oh man where did the girls go...well I mean I know where they went but um well it'll be fun to see Heie's and Kouga's reactions:D...oh man you see MEN never pay attention do they...hehehe...J/K
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:52 EST
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that was anotehr GREAT chapter...I love your story:D
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Reviewed By: Deviant On: November 01, 2004 06:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raw, Brutal, practically oozing with consentual violence... My God, darling... It's four in the morning and I just finished my goddamn presentation, but this just COULDN'T wait. I loved the interactions with the Jagan. Lovelovelove. The fight scene was also particularly well done in that you didn't make an effort to over-describe every teensy thing. Less can definitely be more. However... we all know the chapter is all about the sex. *GRIN* Any other character pairings and parts of that wouldn't have worked. That said, it was posivitely excellent, my dear. The emotion, the behavior, all of it was absolutely lovely. I admit to having a fondness for more ah- physically demanding bouts of passion, and stories that pull it off like this are really why. I only think I saw one typo and a few minor nips here and there, but it's early and hell if I'm not distracted so this may not be the best critique ever. They weren't enough to pull me out the story, and thus, I did not pay them much mine during this reading session. I do feel compelled to tell you about the mental image that I place all blame for on your shoulders. An extremely happy chibi-Jagan thingie rolling around and squealing with glee popped into my head. Made worse by the fact that there was a little sign in front of its "rolling spot" that said "Property of one Certified Sadist, and don't you Fucking forget it." Again, beautifully done.
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